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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
Where whales fly Through auburn clouds And dragons rule again Where fairies dance With leprechauns And unicorns play gin Where titans roam Upon the land And heros are reborn Where warriors fight For virtues lost And peasants aren't forlorn Where angels sing To fireflies Of secrets that they keep Where legends dwell In dreams untold And mystic creatures sleep |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
~Enigma~ WOW!! I really like this, it flows perfect and I love the images it brings.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
Thank you Sea. What can I say...I've always been a sucker for fairy tales. God Bless Disney! |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a wonderful poem... full of images that filled my head with beauty and dreams. wonderful job."Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Ooh! I really enjoyed this! It is so whimsical and pleasurable to read. My son would love this poem! To the library it must go. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
OOPS! double post...forgot to add to the library.  [This message has been edited by sonjes (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Take me away........what beautiful images here, and a refreshing read. Great mind filled wih wonderful thoughts. Jenn E PS I like the "nd unicorns play gin" |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
oopps, I ment and.........I can spell, Honest!!!!lol Jenn E |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
Thanks Dawn. Sonjes...my son loves this one too. And Jenn...if it weren't for my dictionary I couldn't spell a thing. And that line is my favorite too. Thanks all! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wonderful scene ~Enigma~ magical poem "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent my friend. . . what that we could all be carried away on this trip. . . Superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Enigma.... This was wonderful and full of pictures!! I enjoyed this very much!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
for some reason im reminded of fantasia..ever seen the movie by disney? lol "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
Jn - funny thing. I wrote this about an hour after watching fantasia 2000. Sunny - thanks I always thought of myself as an artist. Sven - thanks hon. Been a long time, glad to see ya again. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A magical poem, great imagery and thoughts, what an imagination you have! Sounds like a great place to escape to Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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