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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-08-31 09:35 AM



U

U
Are
Simply
By far the
Most important
Element that exists
Inside this hectic world
I live for you, I breathe for
You and only you for all the rest of
Eternity. I want to spend the rest of my
Life waking up to your those warm green eyes
I want to thank you over and over for all the things
That no one else but you could give to me so completely
You make me feel beautiful. You make me feel smart. You can
Make me feel special, priceless, precious. Something that I have never
Felt before. With no more than a mere glance you have the power
To make me feel thoroughly whole and at peace deep inside
I thank the heavens above every single day and night
For what you have given to me. You have made
Me see that even I can be loved and cherish
And adored.  For that I will always be so
Grateful more than I can express in
Any words. You’re my greatest
Gift. My guiding light
Through this night
I just want to
Say that
I love
U



© Copyright 2000 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2000-08-31 10:15 AM


Awesome.... and quite an intriguing title, if I might say so...
monique
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2 posted 2000-08-31 12:00 PM


I love the design
And all that's in it

monique

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-08-31 12:15 PM


One simple letter of the alphabet and a million thoughts of happiness shared.  Beautiful and the format was a nice touch.
rosepetals25
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4 posted 2000-08-31 03:54 PM


Nan - I'm glad you stopped in and I'm glad you liked the poem and the title (I'm always struggling with the title part..lol)

monique - Thank you   I'm happy you stopped in to read

Michael -     Thank you! You say such nice and wonderful things. I'm glad you liked it  



[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 08-31-2000).]

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