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Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

0 posted 2000-08-31 02:02 AM


I hope this is ok to put here.........

Upon warm duvet of feathers
my gentle body placed
seductive voice seduces
sweet lips is what I taste
His turn to take control
nothing I want more
Do to me what you will
love, taste, explore.....
Breathing starts to quicken
Fingers in his hair
Life could end this moment
I really would'nt care
Reaching point of pleasure
of this I will confess
and all I have left to say
is YES.. YES... YES...




[This message has been edited by Jenn E (edited 08-31-2000).]

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MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 112
Oklahoma
1 posted 2000-08-31 02:08 AM


YES...  This was my first read for the night, and what a way to get things started.  So much ecstasy and passion here.  Loved it!!
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-08-31 03:26 AM



Oh.....Jenn E.....this is wonderful, and erotic, but done in a style of grace that I really admire!!!!

          Fantastic job, my good friend,
           and you have become a new
                inspiration!!!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville
3 posted 2000-08-31 03:48 AM


I love feathers and how warm they can get, have any room left in there?
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4 posted 2000-08-31 07:34 AM


JennE~
Softly done.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
5 posted 2000-08-31 11:25 PM


MysticalNights* Thank You kind sir...  

Sunny1* A big bunch of Thank You's. I have never been a "inspiration" before, so I will take that generous comment, smile and say Thank you     

MG* Forever room for you........ hehehe

Marge* Thank you.......

Jenn E

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
6 posted 2000-08-31 11:47 PM


Jenn E, this was very passionett. Oh darn wish I was there....  

Parker

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
7 posted 2000-08-31 11:49 PM


YUMMMMM!!!!!!

i love feathers....

wonderful!

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2000-08-31 11:51 PM


Whew I was worried when I read your prepost comment but you have penned it with taste in a very sensual way.  Loved it ALMOST as much as you did.
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