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Local Rebel
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0 posted 2000-08-30 03:59 PM


time out -- oops ya missed it

[This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 08-31-2000).]

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Jenn E
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1 posted 2000-08-30 04:14 PM


You have left me completley in awe. I am not sure what to say....... you have a incredibly deep, beautiful mind. WOW! As for your answer to the topic in question...very true. You have a very open mind and anyone who reads this be "broadened" as a result of these amazing words and thoughts. I know we have all asked this "topic question" to ourselvs and others. I know I have. I can't stop re-reading. This is in my library. Thank You ever so much for this......I am sorry  but MAN OH MAN I am just stunned here.

Jenn E

LngJhnAg
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2 posted 2000-08-30 04:21 PM


Hawk - Man, you are really, really deep.  I enjoyed the complexity of your poem, and the the dissertation following it was quite interesting. yeah, I've got a lot of material here I can plagiarize, then everybody will say I am a lot like Hawk.  That oughta win me some extra kudos.  Thanks for the info, but I don't think I can use any of it....
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
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3 posted 2000-08-30 04:43 PM


this invocation is an indication of the inspiration of a very fine poet.... an integration of intricate thought through superb use of wording....!!

oh, could you tell i got a BANG out of it!?!  

Excellent writing, my fine feathered friend.    

~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a good apology and some decent poetry ~

Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
4 posted 2000-08-30 05:34 PM


Jenn E..... well... what can I say?  Thanks glad you enjoyed it...

Long John.... you know what happens to anybody who steals... er... borrows from me!!
thanks (I think?) lol

Doreen.... yeah... there's a lot there to swallow... glad it gave you something to digest!  

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