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SEA
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0 posted 08-30-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


Can you feel Fall coming
the crispness in the air
Autumn is around the corner
soon the trees will be bare

It's time for cozy weather
add a blanket to the bed
soon I'll be making
home made stews and bread

Light a fire,
then come snuggle up with me
when it's raining
this is where I want to be

Yes, I can feel Fall coming
storm clouds are in my sight
Autumn is around the corner
much to my delight!
-SEA-


* I've been so busy and my muse has been playing hookey.....the stormy weather got her back today!   *



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1 posted 08-30-2000 02:51 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Hi SEA.....

           This one is great~!! I love Fall, think it's my fav time of the year because of all the colors!
        Looks like your muse is going well and strong!!  Welcome back!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!


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And what a beautiful day for her to come back on.  I love the autumn time and the haunting reflections it brings to us as we start to get in that certain mood for the season.  Superb writing...truley superb
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On this 3rd day in a row of 110 degree temps I believe miss Fall is nowhere in sight! If you see her, tell her to get her butt over here!!     Wonderful piece!!

-jaimie

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4 posted 08-30-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for susanbartee   Email susanbartee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for susanbartee

Fall is such a beautiful time of year.  Beautifully expressed.  I can't wait for the trees to turn to those beautiful autumn colors.  (I have awhile to wait I'm afraid as it is probably 100 here in Houston, TX.
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Save me a place at the table for the stew and homemade bread!   This is great SEA.  Starting to feel the cool weather here in Wyoming.  
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6 posted 08-30-2000 04:10 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Sunny1~Me too! I love the colors, the smells,and the weather....thank you  

Mark~yes, it's cold and cloudy here today, I love it, thank you  

Lady~I'll try to hurry her on her way to see you!  

Susan~ sorry for the heat you are going through in Texas( I love Texas btw) I hope you get some cooler weather soon!  

Eloise~ It's yummy! I make a great garlic loaf too! I bet it's beautiful in Wyoming.
-SEA


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Susan - May I add a verse or two to your lovely poem?  *innocent eyes*

And when the Autumn winds blow in
And strip the leaves away,
I'll be able to see the stranded cats,
I chased up there in May.

heh heh - I couldn't help it - it must be my "Kitty-kicking" time of month again.

Your poem (on the other hand) was very sweet, and made me think of my Lorelei.  Thank you.
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8 posted 08-30-2000 04:25 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

LngJhnAg~ Ahhh! Too funny! That's perfect....
I'm glad you liked it   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

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SEA~
Ahhhhhh !
Make mine Spring right after the Fall ...
could we just skip Winter forever ?

Lovely thoughts, luv.
~*Marge*~


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10 posted 09-05-2000 09:47 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

I want to snuggle!
Such a beautiful poem SEA
I love the Fall…..
And winter….
Can't forget spring!
………….!
Now how could I leave out summer!!
The beach, the sand, the biki…..Oops!
I mean because Fall comes next!
Loved your poem!
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11 posted 09-05-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Ahhh perfect timing SEA! What a lovely poem to get me out of the doldrums ... I heard we're going to get frost up here in Ontario tonight ... yikes ... how did that sneak in so quickly? Your wonderful poem helped to remind me "why" I don't mind ... thank you SEA ... very nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
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12 posted 09-05-2000 09:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, I can feel it! Great poem!  

Denise
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Marge~ I lived in Panama City for 3 months "once upon a time" about 9 years ago and it was at the end of the year, I think Spring time there would have been very nice, but I sure enjoyed Bingo at the Bingo Palace!  

Insect~ You got it!  

Kit~ Thank you, I love the Fall...my favorite time of year, so many wonderful things, so many great memories...ahhhh.

Denise~ Thanks!  
-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

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Sea~
I love this, it is so beautiful  
Excellent writings. Autumn is such a lovely time of year I must agree but I'm still glad it's finally spring here in Oz.
Tracie~


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Tracie~ thanks sweetie   I bet it's beautiful there!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

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16 posted 09-07-2000 03:01 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

SEA,
This is amazing and beautiful....

great, great work....

regards,
sudhir
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Sudhir~ that is so nice, thanks!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

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18 posted 09-07-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Fall is felt and reminds me to appreciate it more through your poem. Thanks
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What a wonderful poem SEA.  Fall is my favorite season, and you described why just perfectly.  Bonnie
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hi SEA,
I just loved this one...
It's soooo sweet...
Got me all hyped to play in a mound of leaves...
Okay well, I'll rake em up too...
Coco

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21 posted 03-11-2013 03:31 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I miss SEA.  And I miss her poetry.

A
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I miss SEA too ... love her poetry and her personality.

Hoping that there will be a come-back soon!

Margherita
 
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