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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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she gave you shy smiles and sincere wishes visceral dreams and serene comfort all in a glance a spot of romance gilded with crystalline edges and hollyhock garden ledges she warmed your soul took control let you rise and fall so softly she was there then she was not but a whisper in your ear and a shiver up your spine small hairs raised on your arm yet no feel of alarm because the warmth stays in the sun’s rays and in the shy of her smile Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sunshine.... Very beautifully penned!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ this is beautiful, I really like the feel!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sunshine,...this reads soOo neatly. Mmm. How beautiful. A soft landing unto my being. Thank you. *Peace. |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Sunshine - another fine piece of art so beautifully written. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
HEY!! quit gossiping about me!!!! hehe *wink* loved this, karilea... great writing  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
she was there then she was not but a whisper in your ear and a shiver up your spine small hairs raised on your arm yet no feel of alarm because the warmth stays in the sun’s rays and in the shy of her smile Whew......man o man!!!! I thought it was my medication!  |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
So gentle and sweet.....makes me sigh a warm sigh.....Ahhhhhhhhhh.....I loved this. OH MARK* Medication? You wer'nt supposed to tell everyone about the Viagra....LOL (kidding) I am just being a smart a** .....heheheheheJenn E |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny1, thanks... SEA, so did I... SF - I'm so glad you did... Susan, thank you... doreen, who told? Mark, no, it's MY medication... Jenn, LOL! Thanks... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hey I thought you were under sedatives yesterday... but drugged or not, you write such excellent poems... WOW, this is dazzling... regards, sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I don't know about anyone else but it was certainly medication for me. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir...I was...still am... Kethrie...meds for the soul...thanks... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm with Kehtry. . . just what I needed. . . Just beautiful Sunshine. . . perhaps we ALL could use a little medication from time to time!! LOL It's reads like a window into your heart. . . Excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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