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Infinite Possibility |
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the romantic fanatic Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 26Spokane, WA U.S.A. 
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Consume, procreate, then waste away to dust; Ebb and flow, as even the ocean must, Alternate between ice and fire; day and night, Decompose or devour, to die just of fright, Circular pathways dissect our being, Yet still the circle allows for everything. D-mon |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow...alot of depth in so few lines. I can tell you're one who sits and ponders on the many mysteries around us...this was really good! I also like how you used so many of the things in nature around us - fire, ice, the ocean etc. Really adds depth to it. Will definately look forward to more of your thoughts! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
looking forward to more of your insights on this life we live, the death we die, and the way things happen in your world. I loved this poem very close to my heart |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Gen - Be nice. D-Mon: Interesting thoughts... though the most interesting I think... it rhymes.  |
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