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Eilidh
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since 2000-08-27
Posts 30


0 posted 2000-08-29 05:17 AM


Come with me and sit a while
The tales I'll tell could make you smile.
I'll speak of legends and myths
And such things long since missed.
Close your eyes, imagine the impossible
It isn't really, it's just improbable.
Else I wouldn't be here.
With shinning white coat and mane of hair.
Watching you with intelligent eyes
I can see your heart, can see where you cry.
I'm a healer you know
it's why my horn doth glow.
Healing is why I was born
I'm a real live Unicorn.


Eilidh (pronounced Ay-lee)

© Copyright 2000 Eilidh - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-08-29 05:20 AM


Eilidh,
what a lovely name and a lovely poem as well.
Welcome officially to passions.
be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Dee
Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
2 posted 2000-08-29 06:44 AM


Eilidh, Welcome to Passions, what an entrance!
Dee

rosepetals25
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Posts 3076
PA
3 posted 2000-08-29 06:48 AM


Eilidh,

    What a delightful poem.   Welcome to Passions   I am looking forward to reading more.

           rp25

Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-08-29 07:29 AM


Eilidh~
Welcome to Passions.

Your entrance with a fantasy piece
is intriguing.
Hope to see more of your work.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



sonjes
Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-08-29 07:30 AM


This was a most enchanting poem...WELCOME!!!!
  I truly enjoyed your first post...can't wait for more.  

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
6 posted 2000-08-30 04:17 AM


Eilidh,

You have made an excellent entry into this family of poets, one of the best places on the world wide web... and reading you poetry makes me feel fortunate to be part of it...

a lovely poem...

WELCOME TO PASSIONS  

regards,
sudhir

sonjes
Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
7 posted 2000-08-31 03:03 PM


I enjoyed reading your poem again, Eilidh...so much so, I had to return it to the top.    

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
8 posted 2000-08-31 03:40 PM


I love unicorns...and I love your entrance..welcome to Passions
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