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What Would I do?
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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What Would I do? What would I do? If you suddenly went away. Would I be able go on? What would I do? If one day you did not love me. Would I be able to exist? What would I do? If you no longer wanted me Could I live with the ache inside? What would I do? Not having your warm embrace Would I freeze in the cold lonely night? What would I do? Without your sweet whispers of love? Would I go deaf to the world? What would I do? If I could not see your face. Would I go blind to all beauty? What would I do? If I had to be all alone again Would I survive without your love to save me? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
All questions that I hope you never have to answer. Tis a rough road in loss of love and can be the most confusing and overwhelming times in our lives. You have penned this well and I truely hope you never come back to us with the answers. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rosepetals25... I hope with all my heart that you never have to find the answers to those questions. I enjoyed the beauty of this bittersweet poem, and I do know the answers. Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
heart wrenching questions these ares, and as sunny1 has said i hope u do not have to find out the answeres to them....beautuful piece you have here...makes one think  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark - Thank you. Hopefully I will not be able to answer these questions, I suppose time will tell. Sunny - I'm so sorry that unfortunately you know the answers. I thought I knew answers... but I also realized I have never truely been in love until now. Thank you for stopping in to read. JnR4eva - Thank you for stopping by and for the compliment. If it makes you think then I guess I did my job well. |
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