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There is something to be said........
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 There is something to be said for moonlight But what about when the moons sleeps There is something to be said for sunrise But what happens when the darkness creeps There is something to be said for beach walks But what is there when the snow falls There is something to be said for firelight But what happens when blazing summer calls There is something to be said for love songs But what happens when the music slows There is something to be said for sweet poetry But what is there when the muse goes There is something to be said for tender kisses But what is there when the kiss must cease There is something to be said for holding on tight But what happens when you loose the peace There is something to be said for loving you But what happens when you see the real me There is something to be said for mirrored souls But what happens when it’s not what you want to see There is always something left to be said But you can chose not to lend an ear There is always someone to tell you what they think But you are always there to hold me near There is something to be said for a true love But with it comes the acceptance of who I will be There is something shared between our two souls But this makes all the promises of love easy to see |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Holly my dear sweet friend. You know that this got to me. You have penned such a beautiful creation here. It shows the anxiety of finding a true love and all the fears that go with it. Absolutely wonderful!  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* I was hoping you'd be the first reply...thank you for your help on this..giving my muse a kick  your friendship is cherished..Thank you sweets! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BDC, You have said much in these words my friend. There is something to be said about the heart of a poet . . . soft, sweet, loving . . . when the love is true, all is revealed. Wishing you nothing but the best, sweets, you deserve it. Wonderful writing!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
There is something I have to say, this is fabulous writing my friend! Without doubt one of your best. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
This is so beautiful, Holly. Brings back memories of first love with all the joy and pain. Dee |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Butterflies_dont cry - there is such beauty in your words. I felt such emotion in this piece. I always search for your next masterpiece as they are always so very good. Waiting!!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LW* Thank you so much my dear friend, I'm so glad you liked it and I see the same in your heart.....sincerely~ Eagle* **blushing** Thank you very much...coming from you that comment means the world to me~ Dee* Thank you so very much, I appreciate you reading and taking the time to reply~ Susan* You lil sweetie...you are MUCH to kind!! Thank you from the bottom of my heart~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just lending an ear once again. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Just a truly lovely poem, perfect words, perfect phrases, and sheer perfection. Awesome!!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Butterflies--This poem is lovely from beginning to end. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Bdc......aaaaaaaawww girl...you just plucked this hearts strings with this one... |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
There's always more to say for me... Very well written...I know the feeling If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
butterflies~ this is a most divinely beautiful writing... regards, sudhir |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Great work, BDC! I love this one!! I've read it several times and keep meaning to respond. Better late than never I guess. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* Thank you my friend Marsha* Many thanks to you, your comments are appreciated~ Martie* Your comments always mean the world to me...thank you~ Paula* I hope it played a sweet song for you...thank you~ Avanti* Thank you for reading and sharing your comments~ Sudhir* Thank you my friend, it's an honor to hear from you as always~ TA* Yes it is Thank you for taking the time to reply, I know that you are very busy and I appreciate it~ |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Butterflies~ I'm just about to cry here! I love this! I am sorry I have been away for so long, but I just got my computer up and going again. I have missed you so much -- you can't even imagine. Dear friend, you have a beautiful heart. Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ And you said it all so lovingly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
BDC there's something to be said for the way you write - beautiful. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Terry* You have been missed.....thank you for your kind comments...they always touch my heart~ Marge* Thank you so very much I appreciate you reading~ Kethry* Many blushes...Thank you from the bottom of my heart~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This one also....  |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
You suprise me, every time I read another of your poems, it seems atleast as good as if not better than the last, you are a truly great poet, And you always manage to get a lot of meaning into your work . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* Handing in extra credit...lol thank you CB Tom* What a very very sweet thing to say..I'm flattered beyond words, I can only hope I can continue that pattern in your eyes~ |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
You have this amazing ability to reach into the very heart of a person.........this is simply beautiful. Jenn E |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what can I say, this is wonderful..more! more! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wow! This is absolutely beautiful! I loved it from beginning to end! Thanks for something I will read over and over again!! sp |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
JennE* I hope to never loose that...thank you so very much for your kind replies~ IRose* Thank you....Thank you SP* The pleasure is mine...thank you for reading and for sharing such a kind reply~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
There is something to be said about sweet and dear poems..... and its that they make you smile and lift your way.... and then you wonder why you didn't read them the other day... Bravo Butterflies... Parker |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Butterflies! So lovely! Denise |
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