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Open Poetry #9

Faded Linen Breeze

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2000-08-28 10:05 AM

Faded Linen Breeze

Seasalt air sweeping in,
off water's sky in time.
Uphill in stride, with
practiced flowing ease.
Through windows wide and by,
the faded linen breeze.
Scented air sings songs of free,
of whispers once carried,
to rested, rained on teas.

[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 08-28-2000).]

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

1 posted 2000-08-28 10:12 AM

this one is heavenly
"scented air sings songs of free"
this one flows within me...thank you
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

2 posted 2000-08-28 12:04 PM

ooooh nice! I have a linen scented candle, it's quite nice!

Yer poem is too!
~Heather

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

3 posted 2000-08-28 12:26 PM

Hi SpitFire
I like this one it flows like a sea breeze.
Been busy lately.
Nice to read you again!

_______________________
She skates with ease
Hovering like a breeze
Gliding with the contour
A defying gravity ruler
And slalom at it's best
No time for a rest
A supersonic skater
No one is greater
As she stands in the center waving to me
They spray pink champagne on her and her trophy
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