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Poetry Princess
Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28
Des Moines, IA

0 posted 2000-08-28 01:22 AM


No Doubt

All I want is for him
to want to be with me
I hold him tight and
try to make him see

But he is too blind to all
the emotions I feel inside
And he doesn't understand all
the tear I have cried

He want me to pretend that
there's nothing wrong
But I can only take this
pain for so long

I try to ignore it and
pretend it's not there
But I love him so much
and I truly care

I would do anything to be
able to call him my man
But I don't think he will
see I don't think he can

Because he truly loves
her and not me
So I have to step back
and let them be

So I need to run I
need to get out
Because he'll be with her
in the end I have NO DOUBT




POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend?

© Copyright 2000 Randi - All Rights Reserved
ladysixstring
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

1 posted 2000-08-28 01:03 PM


Emotionally powerful!  Great job!!

-jaimie

Website: www.ladysixstring.com

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-08-28 01:43 PM




  It is really, really painful to step out of the picture. But that is the greatest love of all.....to let go, so the one you love can have their happiness.  You did a splendid job on this, my friend!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



MMoonchild
Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
3 posted 2000-08-28 05:07 PM


whew..this doesn't sound like a win win situation no matter what, princess...if  real  I can feel your despair
~~soft hugs


and if not..well you made me feel it anyway

Maureen

JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
4 posted 2000-08-28 05:17 PM


oooooooo...you have written those words so well and this is something that I can definitely relate to......NEVER play second fiddle....I just return mine when i am done... Just kidding,,,,but I loved the post.....take care...

Julie :)



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