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The Edge of Emotion
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The Edge of Emotion |
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lb New Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 7California |
"The Edge of Emotion" How can everything be so black and white for you? Is it the male gene coming through? Can emotions be so specifically categorized and pat? Your insecurities point of view. I see shades of gray so bright and so clearly. Face up to the "what if's" and "maybe's", admit a feeling and accept the consequences, exploring all the possibilities. To pigeon-hole and bluntly state as facts an emotional situation you choose to betray, cannot be masked with uncolored gestures, nor can they fade without the gray. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a powerful first post...welcome to Passions |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
enjoyed your poetry. Nicely written. |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Fancy meeting you here! Welcome aboard, Lori. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Wonderful Post - welcome - (and I totally agree) |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Welcome, welcome! I must tell you that I read this, reread it again, and then thought about it before I replied. I cannot begin to explain what your poem means to me...just that I really liked it and I am definitely looking forward to more. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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lb New Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 7California |
Thanks all for taking the time to read my post and reply. I'm glad to be here. Hey John, It's good to see you here. Looks like you've been here a while and as usual, capturing admirers! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Yes yes yes!!! this is great!! Welcome to passions.....you have a lot of talent and I do know all about black and white situations...this way or no way...i hope this is the pint you were making....good job! :0) Julie :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Ib...... This is truly great writing, and I would like to add my welcome to everyone else's here!! Glad to have you in the family and I think you will really love it!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
wow this is good...VERY GOOD  the words sunk into me and the images just arose with the archtypical man and how he deals with emotions, confronted by his love...well as you can see i really enjoyed this piece, fierce indeed WELCOME TO PASSIONS  ."my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi IB...Welcome to Passions...great first post! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Welcome to Passions!! Wonderful first post. Juls |
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Eddie de Jong Junior Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 27 |
Welcome and congrats on a very good post. I can truly relate to this one. Hope to see lots more. |
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