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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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0 posted 2000-08-27 06:44 PM


For Robb....

i need a man that can touch my soul
i need a man with with a little class
i need a man that can make me whole
i thought you might be him
so i wonder if you'll let me in
the loving you give should
be a federal offense
i'd give you a citiation
but i'm sure you'd
conjure up a good defense

i saw that black moon hanging low
i couldn't help but let my feelings show
so just remember this my friend
i really need to see you again
a drug i'm sure
a hard habit to break
i just want to give
the same thing
you'd like to take

i wonder what your doing now....
i wonder if i could get you
alone somehow
cause i don't want to be your groupie
i need a little more
it's not that I'm lonely
i kind of like it on my own
and i'm not the jealous kind
just can't seem to get you off my mind
won't wear your heart on my sleeve
your in my head
out of the blue
can't stop thinking of you
now baby tell me what should i do?

'cause i saw that black moon hanging low
i couldn't help but let my feelings show
so just remember this my friend
i really need to see you again
a drug i'm sure
a hard habit to break
i just want to give
the same thing
you'd like to take

and i never looked down
on that rollar coaster ride
head spinning 'round
as i felt you deep inside
baby to be that sexy
has got to be a crime
i know the perfect place
where you can do your time
i'll make it the best time
you've ever done
'cause baby my heart is
doing time already
my heart you've already won

and i saw that black moon hanging so low
did you mind that i let my feelings show?
will you remember?
i need to see you again
you're a drug
used once and hooked
a hard habit to break
if i give will you take?

i thought i only wanted some fun
it's all your fault
you did this to me
why did you have to be
so DAMN sexy??
now i'm not sure
what you want from me
tell me can we meet tonight?
under the the black moon
blocking out the light
incognito
noone will know
feel your body pressed up to mine
baby your loving is one of a kind
a kind of love that has to be a crime
baby better start serving your time
'cause i can't seem to get you off my mind

and i saw that black moon hanging so low
did you mind that I let my feelings show?
will you remember?
i need to see you again
you're a drug
used once and hooked
a hard habit to break
if I give will you take?
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Julie  






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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-08-27 09:41 PM


This would make a great song, Julie!

Denise

JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
2 posted 2000-08-27 10:21 PM


Thank you Denise...I just hope I didn't scare him off.....I would love to hear music behind this but I do not write music...take care and thank you again for your reply..

Julie :)



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