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Lack of Love
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Lack of Love |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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When I say I love you Do the words mean anything to you? Bouquet of flowers I bring you every day But do I hear a thank you coming my way? Poems for you I write every night No smile on your face I seem to sight I give you all of time Pushing me aside you decide to whine, I hold your hand in need of some comfort But you are looking too busy to notice my hurt I lied to my friends to fill your needs, Is this how you repay your deeds? My fears I turn them on their back Only to find that love for me you lack. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
ouch....these words...there is an innocence to them..a lover just wanting to know if u still love?...just wanting to know, so confused and lost...nice write here xeonox..'tis sad  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Where the heck is that cherub with the bow and arrow when you need it most. This one really stung but you show your pain and anguish well with your talent to pen. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dump her! There's plenty of people in this world who know how precious love can be - find one of them instead. This is a pretty good poem about frustration and sensing the time to move on. Listen to the voices inside you, and listen to her actions. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AWWWW hon...this one stings...you deserve better and we both know that.Sad sad write. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I thank you for the kind words my friend. This is the girl who I wrote the poem called August 8th and Rose. Thank you once again.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings... I think it is almost impossible to please someone that doesn't appreciate you...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
The hardest thing in the world is to be taken for granted by the one that you love the most......it hurts worse than any other kind of pain.......But here you have friends who care........ You wrote your feelings well! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
It hurt beyond what I could write down, but I am glad that you guys understand. I am also happy that I have a place "The Passions" to come and dump it on you guys. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
I fear that I have no words left to express the way you have made me feel with this poem...I'm mad for you, I'm hurt for you, I'm angered for you...gee, I don't even know the girl...but your words have touched my inner core and feelings that I myself do not like to think about. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I can't believe anyone would not appreciate fine poetry especially if written to or about them....but I can understand as I have it in the reverse...it is seen as a hobby or something not to take seriously...hmmmmm ..well I enjoy yours..  ~~softsmiles Maureen |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
xeon~ These feelings I know all to well...and felt them more than once or twice...it almost seems an unbreakable cycle for me, yet I still refuse to accept that this could be true...as I am in my last attempt, in my best attempt, with one that I could never believe would wish to hurt me, and who I adore and admire beyond even by my own comprehension, She is the one I have always sought, this I knew from start, but it took] half a life to find her, but it will be worth that and more, the road has been smooth, and very rocky, yet hope is fresh still, so just stay with your your good and honest words..caution can help some, but these pains never go, you just have to put them away as deep as you can, and move on and try to find that one that is special for you... Good luck and keep writing.... I have a couple older poems you may like to read...one is The Rose Beckons that is of similar content as this one of yours,, the other is a favorite of mine called ...The River Runs.. about lifes ups and downs and out looks.. Steve B You can read these at my site.. The 440 ZONE if you like.... http://www.geocities.com/ericb52/ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Steve B, Thank you for being here for me. I feel what you have said. The cycle seems unbreakable, but there is always hope. Thank you very much for letting me know that I am not alone. Thank you, the others and god. Ronil Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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