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Make a Wish |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Are you looking out your window? Do you see what I can see? When I wish upon a star, I close my eyes, and with my heart, I see you wishing back at me.... When you look upon a rainbow.. Do the colors make you smile? Do you wish that life could be, filled with colors like you see, If only for a little while? When you look upon a meadow.. filled with flowers everywhere.. Do you wish for just one day, on a blanket we could lay.. Let the sun dissolve our cares? When you see a full moon shining.. Does it make you want to dance? Do you wish forevermore, love would knock on your heart's door, Do you wish for some romance? I have wished a lot of wishes.. Some are gone, while some remain.. I wish tonight that I will find, your sweet love within my mind, Wishing out our windowpane.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey I think I passed him in the stars on the way to my love's window pane. He will be there in just a few. Lovely verse and cute as heck as well. SO innocent like.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mark... Beings you got here first, this one is for you and your special love!!!!!!!! I need to wash my windowpane!! (thank you) Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi Sunny, I truly enjoyed this one..it's a keeper 4 me Coco |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Thanks so much....I know she will appreciate it as well. |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
nice..very nice indeed...i loved the questions and the way you brought them up...and the imagery is great..when i was reading i was seeing myself with my love...and looking onto the stars..and me asking those questiosn in mind....i love poems that do this to me..take me away..thank you for sharing "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
WONDERFUL, Sunny!! Michael by Michael Auguste "But I am so like everyone<br> And everyone is so like me We cork our contents, lest they flee Until our lives are spent |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Coco...(I love your name!!) Thank you so much for saying that, and I am glad you came by to visit!! Hi Mark... I wish both of you love and joy!! Hi JnR4eva... We are of like souls, you and I!I also like to set my mind free, and just imagine........ Enjoy your day!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Michael.... That one word, coming from you, brought a smile of happiness to my soul!! thank you, my very good friend.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, Another lovely writing of yours I have read. When you look upon a meadow.. filled with flowers everywhere.. Do you wish for just one day, on a blanket we could lay.. Let the sun dissolve our cares? "The meadow I have been, and the flowers have I smelled. A blanket would I lay on, and feel the warmth of the sun, as I became compelled." Just a lovely poem Sunny. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh Bill..... What a beautiful verse you added! Someday I will find this meadow...I think it might be in Washington state!! A gypsy has to roam..... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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