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Spilled Moonlight
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Spilled Moonlight |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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~ Spilled Moonlight ~ by poetFemmeFatale The moon spills in & lights your hair moonlight shadows everywhere - The softest hue of whitest blue across your face - I gaze at you... Your eyes closed soft in deepest sleep Forever pray this moment keep. I slowly breathe your hair, your skin like somewhere that I've never been - Your arms so strong around me tight the moon spills in on us tonight... I brush your cheek then with my hand I trace your jaw, you understand - Still sleeping though, you turn towards me with eyes closed soft, you look at me... I push your hair back from your face and fall asleep in your embrace - The moon spills in there as we sleep Forever pray this moment keep... [This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 08-26-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Forever pray this moment keep" Absolutely beautiful PoetFemme! This flows like a sweet and tender lullibye ... softly romantic and heartening ... just lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, you always touch me in your poetry, and this is one of many that express my feelings so well. catalinamoon |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Femme, it has been a long time since I've seen you around, and I've gotta tell ya, it's been worth the wait. I've read your recent posts, just haven't had time yet to reply to them...but they have all astounded me in their sheer beauty. In awe, Alicat |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely, Gen!! Just lovely....... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Gen, I love your new found inspiration. . . it's just amazing. . . This is no exception!!! ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Soft and romantic and so very beautiful, PFF. *sighs* You have such wondrous talent... *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lovingly written Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow....I want one of these moments....ohhhh yeah.......I think I had one last night...but alas I woke up. Lovely penning from you. Your talent with the cadence and the flow is superb |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Beautiful! So expertly written and with such softness. Lovely poem, I enjoyed it so much. Linda M. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
PPF, wow, this poem could melt candles and candle holders, I am surprised that my computer has not melted, beautifully written. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
The peace that you portray in this poem is incredible!!! how could i have missed this one. I loved it. miriam |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful, from the title to the last word...soft and sensual and loving. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The title alone is pure and perfect poetry...you've woven an exquisite piece of work from start to finish PFF~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
There's no doubt in my mind - If I had a love like yours - my feelings would match yours and my prayer as fervent - but I could never match the quality and beauty of your words - This is a treasure. ~Love is a symbol of eternity. It wipes out all sense of time,destroying all memory of a beginning and all fear of an end. ~ Germain de Stael ~ wilfredyeats@hotmail.com |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
what a beautiful poem... -sighs- I enjoyed it a lot. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
You are SOOOOOOO good!!! I love how you write! PERFECT this is. So tender and sweet and (sighs) so romantic. Jenn E I must tell you that you look like a girl I went to school with, ever live in Alberta, Canada? lol If not, you are lucky, WAY to many mosquitos......and you have a twin. Jenn E |
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