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Love Comes By Chance (weaving the fabric of romance...challenge)
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Love Comes By Chance (weaving the fabric of romance...challenge) |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Love Comes By Chance (weaving the fabric of romance...challenge) As the late summer sun, splashed it's red into the sea, and cool evening breeze blew, my eyes caught view of she. On veranda, overlooking bay, sipping wine at a local Inn. Both sitting alone, quietly gazing, 'til her visage sets heart arace within. In a trance, I'm lost to all about, even as I see her head turn to me, frozen in my stare, I can not move. Our eyes meet, her smile sets me free. Two glasses rise slight, in friendly greet. I stand, knowing love comes by chance. I try hard not to tremble as I near her, to begin weaving the fabric of romance. Steve B August 2000 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SteveB~ Very nicely woven romantically. Challenge more than met. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent. . . Welcome to Passions my friend. . . this was the first I have read your work and it was indeed a joy!!! Well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Marge~ thank you for you read and appreciated words ...  Steve B.Sven ~ thank you..I came here about a month ago and posted a few, then work took my time away for a while.. but am back thanks for the challenge and look forward to reading and writing again.. glad you enjoyed this one... Steve B |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Steve Challenge well met, hope to see more of your work soon. Welcome to Passions. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Steve, this is simply superb. You've woven that heady thrill of anticipation and intrigue into your words here, and I found it quite intoxicating. Thank you ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
~~Beautiful, Steve B. ...chanson~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful love poem, my friend. You've met your challenge well. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Kethry ~ thank you so much Steve BClaire ~ Is funny they call it a challenge when it makes it so easy having a topic to start with,,, thanks again Steve BChanson ~ your words are well appreciated thank you... Steve BLoveBug ~ kind words are always welcome.. and cherished,, Steve B |
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