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Lover's Sunset--Written with juliet_2u
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Lover's Sunset--Written with juliet_2u |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Two lovers, walking hand in hand Laughing, sharing tender glances Admiring heavens sunset As they stroll on silky sand Gently rolls in the tide The wind shares their secrets The sun warms their hearts As they this last light bide Whispering wishes to white sea foam Tossing all cares into blue sky Reveling in warm embraces Cherishing this time alone The gull shares its song The last boat sails into the sky Above it all the rush of ocean Telling them that this time is not long. . . Sighing, they know that they've been blessed Sharing a tender kiss Clinging to the moment Watching the fading of this lovers sunset. -------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 08-26-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Indeed we will. . . I already have a spot Juls. . . I'll be waiting. . . This was fun to write with you too. . .  ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Juliet and Sven~ What a charming stroll. Very well done - Why I'll bet you have sand 'tween your toes. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey I saw you guys there. I wanted to come and say hi but you were busy...writing this I suppose....or just living it and all that came after.LOL.....lovely you two....very nice stroll. And I didnt mean to peek....My camcorder did most of the watching...I only watch later as to edit it.   |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Julie and Sven, Congradulations on a fine piece of writing. More, more, must see more together! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is a touching collaboration. ...chanson~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A lovely vignette of serene endings and tender beginnings. Wonderful to read ~ ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Mark, we never caught a glimpse of you. Just too busy I guess,lol. Bill, I'm very sure there will be more to come. Chanson thank you so much. Meadowmuse, thank you also. Again thanks to you all. Juls [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shall all days be sunny, with rain to charm the skies at night and then, you shall reside in Camelot... beautiful, you Two! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Well, since Juls is MAKING me reply to all of you. . . LOL Marge, I would have less sand between my toes if I would have remembered my sandals!! LOL Juls, don't you remember that I saw something shiny?? That must have been Mark!! Hey Mark, save a copy of that for me will ya? Bill. . . more?? You want more?? Well, ok. . . come twist my arm. . . OUCH!!! Ok, ok!!! Chanson, thank you my friend. . . Claire, the ocean has a way of inspiring. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, many thanks. . .me thinks that Camelot itself hast ne'er see such a sunset. . . or a sun to brighten its day. . . Ok Juls?? I replied!!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Juliette N Sven .. this poem you both have written is beautiful! Being a Pacific Coast gurl this one is sweet 4 me you two must write again .. great duet here!!! Coco |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hey, you two... save a piece of that beach for Lorelei and me. Nicely written. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You know Sven....funny thing happened...I was watching it last night on the bigscreen and all of a sudden the whole darn T.v. just went up in flames and melted right before my eyes and the tape was lost. It happened just as you two were poking your heads up from that rock you were behind. Sorry maybe next time. Hey Juls....take the man for another walk will ya....I am going to get a new tape now. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am sure you are my friend....I have no doubt......thinkin about leaving the country right now by way of a state north of me.LOLOL |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
OUCH!! Ok, well, Juls is MAKING me reply to all of you. . . so, here goes. . . Coco, thanks. . . I know that you know just what we're talking about. . . and maybe we will do it again. . . LngJhn, not to be mean. . . but this part of the beach is ours!! LOL Thank you my friend. . . and thank Lorelei too!! Mark, Mark, Mark. . . you just had to go and look at the video didn't you?? Just couldn't keep it to yourself??? SHEESH!!  Thanks!!!-------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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