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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-08-26 10:22 AM


A haiku consists of three parts
a time
a place
An observation

My Haiku for Elizabeth

Your precious visit
The place sunny florida
Beauty come to bloom.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-08-26 10:31 AM


The ease of a view
between beauty of you two
refreshes souls new

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Kethry
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2 posted 2000-08-26 10:40 AM


Sy another solid haiku.

In writing you verse
Elizabeth gets honor
and so deserves it

Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

LngJhnAg
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3 posted 2000-08-26 10:40 AM


Sy - Bravo!  I remember that moment well, and you captured it perfectly.
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-08-26 11:06 AM


A sweet tribute!  
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-08-26 12:11 PM


Sunshine,
Beautiful.

Kethry,
Absolutely.

LngJhnAg,
Thank you I remember it well.

Poet deVine,
Thank you sweet.

Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2000-08-26 12:13 PM


Ah seymour, a lovely one here...

regards,
sudhir

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2000-08-26 04:49 PM


It is in my heart
Reunion of dearest friends
I had never met

Thank you for the Haiku

Liz

Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2000-08-26 06:34 PM


It is in today
hearts within Passions will play
friendships bloom in love

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2000-08-26 07:51 PM


Sudhir,
Once again thank you my friend.

Elizabeth,
Very deep, very beautiful. Love Sy

Mark,
Excellent writing.

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