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Misty Moon (Haiku)

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WhtDove
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0 posted 08-25-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

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Misty moon in dark
With your luminescent glow
Caress me with light
~

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 08-25-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hey Angel, this is beautiful!!
and let me tell ya, she does!  
Jamie
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2 posted 08-26-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Aglow in moonlite
caressed by its soft embrace
surrounded by mist
Alwye
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In the space between moments


3 posted 08-26-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

A very beautiful picture you've painted here! Lovely haiku!    

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis
CocoBaci
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4 posted 08-26-2000 01:43 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Dove, you have a SweeeeeeeeeeeetOneHere

Coco  


[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 08-26-2000).]
juliet_2u
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5 posted 08-26-2000 03:10 AM       View Profile for juliet_2u   Email juliet_2u   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juliet_2u

This is so gorgeous.
Juls
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6 posted 08-26-2000 03:11 AM       View Profile for juliet_2u   Email juliet_2u   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juliet_2u

This is a keeper. I was hoping to come back and add it to my library
Juls


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EagleOne
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7 posted 08-26-2000 03:37 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Lovely!  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.
Denise
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8 posted 08-26-2000 06:09 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice, Rebecca!

Denise
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9 posted 08-26-2000 08:04 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

WhiteDove~
Oh, such beauty !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kethry
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10 posted 08-26-2000 08:18 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Luminescent poem. loved it.

Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-
Poet deVine
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11 posted 08-26-2000 09:14 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wonderful Becky!    
WhtDove
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12 posted 08-26-2000 12:05 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hey Angel girl! I'm glad she does   Thanks!

Prometheus now why didn't I think of that? I like that one. Thanks for adding!

Thanks much Krista!

Coco I'm really glad you liked it. I think I changed it more than 5 times before I came up with this.

Juls thanks! Glad you liked it so much  

EagleOne thank you!

Denise thank you...I'm glad to see your shining face pop up around here! You're sorely missed!!

Marge thanks for the lovely reply  

Kethry glad you did   You be well too!

Thanks Sharon! And Maree for reading and telling me your honest thoughts in the making!


Dawn Eclipse
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13 posted 08-26-2000 03:20 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

lovely haiku.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

BSC
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14 posted 08-26-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Oh Becky what a beauty this is!!!  Such lovely simplicity.  Bonnie
wayoutwalt
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15 posted 08-26-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

great irony in this one yuh bathin in the dark o yuh the light o the moon
sonjes
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16 posted 08-27-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

precious and elegant haiku!  I really liked.  

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

Mark Bohannan
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17 posted 08-27-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Very lovely and full of tranquility.  Love to see more of these from you.
WhtDove
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18 posted 08-27-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Dawn thank you  

Bonnie I'm glad you enjoyed it  

Any better way to be bathin' Walt?  

Thank you very much sonjes! I appreciate that!

Thanks Mark! When I can come up with them, you'll get to see them    I don't get as much inspiration as I'd like to.
Wilfred Yeats
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19 posted 08-28-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for Wilfred Yeats   Email Wilfred Yeats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wilfred Yeats's Home Page   View IP for Wilfred Yeats

absolutely great haiku - need no Dove, need no Dial - need no Irish Spring ~S~

hoot_owl_rn
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20 posted 08-28-2000 09:03 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lovely  
SpitFire
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21 posted 08-28-2000 09:38 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~I agree wholeheartedly with the others that this is one lovely haiku! *Peace.
Sudhir Iyer
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22 posted 08-28-2000 09:40 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Most beautiful...

regards,
sudhir
WhtDove
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23 posted 08-28-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LOL Wilfred! So true, no soap or bubbles needed for this  

Thank you Ruth!

Spitfire I'm glad you do. ~Thanks~

Sudhir most thankful!  
JnR4eva
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24 posted 08-29-2000 03:32 AM       View Profile for JnR4eva   Email JnR4eva   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JnR4eva

ahhh..very nice and soothing....i am off to bed now...thanx for lending this thought for the night  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- rlt


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