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Release Those Feelings
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Release Those Feelings |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sometimes there is a sadness That befalls upon your face. As you struggle with these feelings This frown you can't erase. Sometimes there is a hurt That only you can feel. When others reach to help you, You say it's no big deal. Sometimes there is a jelousy That you can't seem to hide. You try to hold back bitterness, As it twists and pulls inside. Sometimes there is an anger That turns your heart to stone. No type of love you let inside, And you find yourself alone. Let go of all these feelings, And you will surely find. True happiness will follow Along with peace of mind. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This poem hit home. Great poem. You have captured all the feelings  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great advice, Eloise, conveyed so beautifully! Denise |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Fantastic writing, Eloise... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ 'Let go of all these feelings, And you will surely find. True happiness will follow Along with peace of mind.' You just used a tiny little hammer to hit a great big nail squarely on the head ! Wonderfully done ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful words of wisdom Eloise! Beautifully comprised ... and a lovely closing verse ... much enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Eloise, This is so true. I hate to say that today was my breaking point. I feel all of those things you speak of, I hope I can take your advice, as it is the truth. So hard to do sometimes. Beautiful read, Thank You. Jenn E |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Xeonox, denise, Sudhir, Marge, Kit and Jenn, thank you all so much for stopping by and commenting. Sometimes certain emotions overtake us and we just really need to stop and sit back to realize where we are going and do some minor adjustments in our lives to get us back on the right path. Jenn, I hope all went well for you. Thanks. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
very true words you have penned here and so eloquently as well. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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