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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-08-25 12:14 PM


Do Not

Do not look at me that way
please

Do not see into my soul
with such ease

Do not make me wish
for other things

Do not wish for me to misplace
this ring

Do not make your eyes dance
with mine

Do not laugh so heartily on
so little wine

Do not grasp my hand
so tight

Do not make me wish  
for low lamplight

Do not speak to me
so silently

Do not look at me
so loudly

I’ve never met a man
with eyes so green

I’ve never felt
an obsession so keen

Do not ask

Because I would



Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
JnR4eva
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
1 posted 2000-08-25 12:18 PM


i love this very much...falling for his charms in spite of the heart which is afraid..or perhaps not ready..i enjoyed this much    thanx for sharing  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me



susanbartee
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since 2000-08-15
Posts 119
Channelview, TX USA
2 posted 2000-08-25 12:19 PM


Such pleaing in this one. Remember, the grass is not always greener on the other side.  
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2000-08-25 12:19 PM


busybee comes playfully
and sings into my ear,
busybee comes around,
busy bee sings a great song

What the heck, post them all today...
for today I am going to sway in delight...
as a reader blessed with divinity ...

Great poem, this one too....

WOW again...

regards,
sudhir

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
4 posted 2000-08-25 12:25 PM


beware of what you wish for!!!

Tempting is the apple, yes?

Corinne

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2000-08-25 12:29 PM


Only you can decide if those green eyes are worth throwing away that ring for...just be sure before you take it off...it dont go back on so easy.
Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
6 posted 2000-08-25 05:36 PM


Nothing I can say that those above me haven't said - (but my eyes are blue ~G~)
Yes - I know these thoughts (moving my ring round and round my finger)



Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia
7 posted 2000-08-25 05:40 PM


oh now this one is hot....

scorched my eyes...

(brown) eyes..  

Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-08-25 05:58 PM


JnR4eva - Fantasy?...

Susan...perhaps, perhaps not?...

Sudhir...anything to make your day...

Corinne...or fiction?...

Paula, see above, and laugh...and enjoy...

Mr. Yeats, "blue" is good...

Reb, yep it's hot, about 104 just now...and brown works well, as well...

thank you all!

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