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Other Than The Night
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Other Than The Night |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Other Than The Night ~*Marge Tindal~ Somewhere other than the night, I want to catch your smile. Watch the sunlight stroke your face, beaming all the while. Upon the hill, the daffodil swaying in the breeze, calls to me to play among the gentleness of your tease. The light of day, in soft array, feathered on your cheek, causes me to catch a sigh as I try to speak. To hear your laughter booming, knowing I may be the cause, gives me reason to beckon the very sound of it's applause. Cavorting merrily through the meadow like the butterfly on wing, sipping of the very nectar that being with you brings. Somewhere other than the night, you set my heart aglow. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Marge, you will have the opportunity to catch a plethora of smiles from those reading this wonderful poem. Enjoyed very much. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Marge--I could just here that song...somewhere other than the night...and your poem was imagery devine and beautious with your wonderful way with words...I guess you could say I really liked this poem! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yes oh yes...somewhere other than the night...this is GREAT |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Gosh, I always did like those 'plethora' things !  Thank you. Martie~ You, my friend, are as incurably romantic as I am ! I love ya' Paula~ I like knowing you're here with us in this song. Thanks, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
beautiful are the images which you have given us the reader...very emotional and deftly penned..wonderful marge "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Gorgeous and so very romantic Marge! Lovely verse here! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ This was wonderful my friend. Somewhere other than the night . . . we all need more than the night to sustain us. Beautiful piece of poetry you. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Ah I can hear it now the sounds of love, what sweet music you make a tune unforgettable to a heart that understands love's sweet melody. AWESOME Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JnR4eva~ Thank you so much for the thoughtfulness of your reply. Krista~ I'm glad you enjoyed it, dear one. LoneWolf~ Yes, we do. And I enjoy finding that 'more' ! Cerenity~ Hello, my friend. I do like sharing with a heart that sings. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, Coming across one of your gems as I stroll through Passions meadow is always a great pleasure to me. And here is yet another one. Fine work, my friend. Michael |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, to be honest each verse is sooooo sweet can't say I have a favorite one to hmmm about 2nite.. Beautifully written and the imagery is amazing .. you swept me into the meadow and for a lil while I rested amid daffodils enjoying this READ! Ciao, Daniella .. Dani 2 U Marge |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A R W O N D E R F U L O E M S U R R E A L A O N N M A G I C A L T E H O M Y S T I C A L A V A C E N D E A R I N G T L G R I Y E X C E L L E N T N A G R A N D T My regards, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
My gosh ... I think Sudhir said it all! Beautiful evening thoughts to warm the heart Marge! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sudhir looks like he's having trouble finding the right words. i am too. Breathtaking imagery. I particularly liked the cavorting. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ Greatly appreciative for the sincerity of your reply. Dani~ Don't you just love the allure of daffodils ? They always appear to be laughing - spreading joy ! Sudhir~ What a joy to see you at the 'crosswords' ! You are quite the friend. Kit~ Thanks for letting me know you enjoy the thoughts I share. Kethry~ Glad you liked it. I like the 'cavorting' too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Marge, absolutely breathtaking! Soooo beautiful! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"sipping of the very nectar that being with you brings." Miss Marge, you have stolen my heart with this poem, this line, in particular. Being in the presence of one's love is just like this, isn't it? (or at least, so I've been told!) Grateful to you for sharing your treasure with us, my friend. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh boy, hearing the music in the background, looking at all of the lovely images...ahhhh "sipping the very nectar that being with you brings"....just wow Marge, I must go cavort through that meadow now! This is so very Beautiful!!! Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Oh, you are just the best at putting a smile on my face. Claire~ Your delight at this line is so welcomed. Yes, the nectar is sweetly supped. Thank you for letting me share. Bonnie~ I'm always pleased to see that you have read and enjoyed. Thank you for your enthusiasm. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey I bet you thought I was lost or something huh? I always find my way back. This is without a doubt one of my favorites of yours. There are so many it is hard to say so but yesssssss....I believe it is. Wonderful my dear friend of verse. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Marge - What a truly NEAT poem - it reflects the reader's mood and situation in life so well - On the surface, it seems to poem is light-hearted and joyful for the love the author feels for the subject - on another level, it seems the author only receives the subject's attentions at night, when they are intimate, and the author needs so much more than that. This is a wonderful poem for its ability to change its colors so subtly. Great job, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ I may have 'missed the Mark' ... but I do try to keep up with you ! Thanks, love. LongJohn~ I like the way you read me !  Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
Refreshingly beautiful piece, Marge. Took me right outside on a warm spring day. The last 4-line stanza was my favorite. Very picturesque. Enjoyed it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brandyn~ Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh lovely and romantic Marge! enjoyed it |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Keep up with me? Good luck my friend. I outrun myself more often than not but you are welcome to try.LOLOL...actually I have been in the same spot for the last 7 weeks hon'. HUGS TO YOU MY FRIEND |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
just so sweet...I love poems that make me feel all warm inside! I love the topic of this, too. Good piece"We have all these galaxies inside of us. And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ I'm glad ya' liked it ! MarkB~ Hugs to you also ! JennieMay~ Thank you for letting me know. I also enjoy those warm n' fuzzy words ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Don't know which is better...reading Marge's poems, or reading all of the applauding recipients responses...oh, both, I guess! Well done! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Glad to know you enjoy reading BOTH ! Me too !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Spectacular - (and that's an understatement!) and here I am trying to find a greater superlative - aww nuts - I'll just say I loved it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Thank you. 'I loved it ' is good enough for me ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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