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When Our Eyes Meet
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When Our Eyes Meet |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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When Our Eyes Meet You wake, your sleepy eyes search for me you reach for me, finding me still here I search your eyes for answers no words spoken, but many things said Once more you open the windows to your soul naked truth, nothing twisted or hid no mystery, no secrets untold Unfolding love, I hold you close sounds of your beating heart awaken my soul our eyes lock once more the truth I see can never be just a dream You opened the door to my heart I pray this never ends Just look at me once more BloomingRose |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ I search your eyes for answers no words spoken, but many things said' Oh, I like that very thought ! Lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Your giving nature is beautiful to behold - and your lover is very fortunate indeed |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Debra...this is so soft and tender, your words bring the subject home and envoke feelings in your readers...the sign of a great poet my friend. Well done  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Wilfred You are so sweet! Thanks Ruth, Thank you. You are a kind, dear, person. Sign of a true friend. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
So tender this is. Your words are beautiful. I love the end. Jenn E |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderfully written... enjoyed muchly. |
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