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Ravenz23
New Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 7


0 posted 2000-08-24 02:32 PM



I love my hair,
every last long, glistening strand.
There is power in my hair,
a flick of my hand..
pushes it off my shoulder,
bares the soft curve of my neck..
to your gaze.
I throw my hair back behind me,
as I walk,
it swings against the curve of my back.
A little shake to the hips,
a slight strut as I walk,
back erect,
head held high...
I glance over at you,
flick my long, dark hair back,
and that's all it takes...
your mine.


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poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-24 03:03 PM


a very original poem indeed!
and i too use the "flick of the hair" method to gain attention!
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-08-24 03:26 PM


Yes..yes..there is power in hair...especially long black silky hair...James
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