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We will Meet in the Meadow.......a Duet with Bill Charles
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We will Meet in the Meadow.......a Duet with Bill Charles |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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This is a combination of a poem written by myself, "Meet Me in the Meadow" with a beautiful poetic response by Bill Charles, "I Met You in the Meadow" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We hope you enjoy our duet, as.... together, they are complete... (Meet Me....) Meet me in the meadow.. Just before the dawn.. Chases evening shadows.. and lights the path you're on.... (I Met You....) I came there just at dawn.. Down to your lovely meadow.. When the morning mist was lifting.. And the deep blue sky was all aglow.... (Meet Me....) I'll be waiting for you.. By the trickling stream.. Over by the arch..Two.. Weeping Willows lean.... (I Met You....) I could see you waiting there Sitting you were, just like a pose.. But all I could see was ruby red lips.. That reminded me, of one sweet rose.... (Meet Me....) There among the flowers.. I'll lay our blanket down.. We can stay for hours.. No one is around.... (I Met You....) I called and you turned.. Your smile was as big as the sea.. And we lie together on that blanket.. Embracing, just you and me.. (Meet Me....) Soft and gentle breezes.. O'er our bodies play.. It touches and it teases.. Sweeps our cares away.... (I Met You....) I felt that gentle breeze blowing.. Watching it flow, through your pretty hair.. It touched me and I felt it And our bodies became aware.... (Meet Me....) We could love forever.. If we lived in rhyme.. Parting would be never.. Captives for all time.... (I Met You....) Ah yes, I could love you forever.. For you are a lovely, green eyed gypsy.. However, not in rhyme it would be.. But would rather always, be passionately.... (Meet Me....) So, meet me in the meadow.. Just before the light.. Maybe gypsy magic.. Will cast it's spell ~~Tonight~~ (I Met You....) So, I did meet you in your meadow.. And it didn't matter, if it was day or night.. Because I tasted your gypsy magic.. Having your softness, and your ~~Delight~~ Once again, my heartfelt thanks to Bill Charles.. for his touch of magic! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OMG the wands are flying out there... magic dust settling everywhere... and fine music does it play! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Sunny1 and Mr. Charles, this is absolutely beautiful! Bravo  ....chanson~ |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
What a brilliant concept!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I like the way you combine the two |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Good morning Sunshine!! Ahhhh....yes....today is a magic day and we thank you for enjoying our work!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Good Morning chansondegeste... Thank you for such a kind reply and we do appreciate your stopping by for a read!! Good to see you here!! Hello English Rose... Thank you!! Bill and I thought that these poems were such a matching pair, that we would try this. Good to see you here, also!! Hi Paula... Thank you, my friend.....I always like to see your replies!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
What a beautiful and matching pair, this is a duet that was meant. Utterly wonderful!!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunshine, This is indeed magic. Thank you so much for coming by and for your wonderful comments. Hi chansondegeste, Thank you so much for your very considerate comments about what Sunny and I have written. Hello English Rose, I must give credit to Sunny for this exciting concept of bring these two poems together. Thanks for coming by. Hello Paula, Thanks for stopping by Paula, and again, the credit goes to Sunny for this. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunni, What a magnificent job you have done of putting these two writings together. Thank you so much for writing "Meet Me In The Meadow", that gave me the inspiration to write a reply to it. Thank you again, Sunny |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Marsha, Thank you so much for coming by to see and to read this writing. And thank you for the wonderful comments. |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
What chemistry in this piece!!!! Beautifully written by both of you. You do work well together. Possibly more to come? kiss kiss |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill and Sunny Nice job in combining the poems. It certainly tells a beautiful story. didi |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi oh2beme, Thank you so much for the kind comments about this writing. When I saw this together, I even thought that the chemistry was there. And, I do hope that I can work once again with Sunny putting together another. Hi 'didi', Thanks for your kind comments, and for stopping by. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sunny and Bill, what a wonderful piece of work you have combined here. The imagery was great. Hope to see more of you two. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
To everyone who has been kind enough to stop by and reply...... Bill and I would like to say a combined "Thank You", and we are so very happy that you all liked this poem!! Just having a great place like Passions to post your work and receive the feedback that all writers need, is a wonderful experience! We do thank you.... From Sunny and Bill< !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-26-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay so I was late to the first performance but I am glad to make it anyway. Beautiful you two. The flow is as if coming from one pen. encore please. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Eloise.... Thank you so much for coming by to read our work!! We hope to do more in the future..... Hi Mark.... Better late than never!! Ha!! We're glad to see you here, and thank you for requesting an encore!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This is really neat - the way the two poems came together so well - Thanks for posting this. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi LngJhnAg..... I'm glad you enjoyed this, and it was a lot of fun to put together. I must give the credit to Bill, as he wrote the beautiful poem that completed mine. Thank you!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi everyone, Just wanted to thank all of you for your wonderful comments about this writing that Sunny and I have done. And Sunny, if you hadn't written the first part, I would have not written the part that made your writing complete. Thanks Sunny, this one meant an awful lot to me. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Evenin' Bill... This one meant a lot to me, also!!! I thank you so much for joining me in this venture.....it was a lot of fun, and we shall do more, I hope!! Duets are meant for 2!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill and Sunny1~ Very, very nicely done. Inspiring each other is wonderful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marge.... It is a lot of fun when you find a compatible poet to write with!! Bill added such a beautiful poem in response....truly a magic touch!! Thank you for stopping by, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is incredible...I am in complete awe...gorgeous, stunning, wonderful! You two are perfect together! You must write more! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Alwye.... Thank you so much for stopping by, and yes.....I think there will be more! Sharing thoughts has to be the most rewarding experience there is!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a wonderful combination...you two are made for each other...this is an excellent correlation of poetic beauty...well done!!!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
ethome..... Thank you so much!! We did enjoy working on this one, and sharing poetic thoughts!! Glad to have you stop by for a read!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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