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She Haunts
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She Haunts |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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She Haunts Each morning she tries to capture your dream As she wakes too early, to sun's touch of glow. In a blink of an eye, as hers open, it seems You were here, she is left with that warmth that you sow. Stretching, her being, refreshed by your want Searching for words, of a leftover feel. Satin red dressed, she entices, she haunts, This ghost of a woman, so sensually real. You can't resist her, though trying at times A web she has weaved, to capture you in. Words so endearing, and soft smiles she mimes, When in heart, it's the pleasures she gathers of sin. You've met her before, she's the one resting near At arms length you touch, caress image seen. When closer, her scent of vanilla, you fear As desires are rising, then towards her, you lean. A gentlest touch to her cheek, makes her smile. Your lips can't say no, to hers waiting for kiss. The pounding increases, as if run a mile. Intensely, she presses, she needs what has missed. Your arms still her trembling, your eyes hold her gaze. A gift, she has offered, as softly she clings. In the mist of forever, her memory stays Becomes part of you, in each touch that she brings. Wondering why, and what shall become Of these dreamers who wish for some happiness. Each morning they rise to the hopes, of each one Awaiting the moments, a touch of the "bliss". M 8*2k |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow...this was eerie, yet romantically sad somehow. I think I need to read it again to soak it all up though. Very intense piece, but I liked it alot! It's those late night yearnings that seem to keep one from peaceful sleep. I have my own fair share of those that constantly haunt me too. *sigh* Lovely read. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very lovely... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
poetFemmeFatale I am hoping not to be haunted or haunting forever in dreams...would like some real again ~~soft thanks for reading and responding Maureen |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
speaking as one 'haunted' - I'll tell you you wrote this very well - I love it  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Yeats...appreciate the visit {{hugs}} ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Sunshine.... Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Wilfred ...silly you..made me smile on this hazy gray morning ~~soft thanks M *darn I already thanked you..oh well knowing you a second thanks won't upset you at all...{{hugs}} [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-26-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A hauntingly beautiful piece Maureen. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
brian sometimes I think I haunt myself... ~~softly smiling  Maureen |
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