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Balladeer
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0 posted 2000-08-23 11:50 PM


This will be my last post for several days....off to the green hills of North Carolina and some much-needed golf. In view of Hurricane Debbie headed for our fair Florida shores, I am reposting a trilogy of poems I wrote last year as Floyd did the same. Y'all have a great week!    


Hurricane Warning

It's 5 a.m. and here I am out standing in the rain.
It makes me shutter at the news of mister hurricane.
There's food to get and candles and those batteries, of course
And other little odds and ends to help survive the force.
The boat I'll fill with water lest it turn into a plane.
The hoses and the garbage cans, I must bring in - again.
Drinking water must be filled to help me stay alive,
Vienna sausages by the case will insure I survive.

Seymour's right there down the road. Pepper's right near, too
And I am sure that they are doing these same things I do.
It's a fact of life known to Floridians, one and all,
It's best to be prepared when Mother Nature comes to call.

Fred Hobbs is watching from upstate. Caroline's out there, too.
I wish them all the best and hope that they all make it through.
It seems that Mother Nature never likes to skip a chance
At showing little folks like us, our insignifigance.

So it's off to batten hatches, time to tie possessions down
And, when old Floyd has passed, we'll have to see what's still around.
It's just an inconvenience....just a small calamity
But I've survived Toerag and Suthern - how much worse can this one be?

The Calm Before the Storm


The evening is quite peaceful.
The air is slightly warm.
We're going through what experts call
The calm before the storm.

There's nothing in this tranquil scene
To raise cause for alarm.
A night like any other, it's
The calm before the storm.

There's only one thing missing.
I can hear no birds outside.
The lizards, which abound in droves,
Have also gone to hide.

It invokes an eerie feeling
That things are not quite the norm.
God's creatures are familiar with
The calm before the storm.

Our fate is in His hands now
To keep us safe from harm
And, hopefully, we'll get to see
The calm after the storm.

The Forgotten

So now I sit here in my study
On this bright September morning,
A scene so tranquil one forgets
The weather center and its warning.
My house is, thank God, well-constructed,
My preparations thorough, too.
I feel no major threat impending
As Mr. Floyd comes passing through.

Not true of many other people
Who are less fortunate than I.
My thoughts and prayers go out to them.
May this storm also pass them by.

The homeless people live in boxes.
Miami streets they call their home.
No fancy relatives to help them
And they are out there all alone.

The shelters do what they are able
But they will fill up all too fast.
The stench will be quite overpowering.
The food and water will not last.

Some of them can not use the shelters.
Their crimes will not let them appear.
God has become their judge and jury
And now their day in court is here.

The elderly along the beaches
Sit there alone and scared to death.
They have outlived all who could help them
They sit in fear with baited breath.

Hospital patients lay in small rooms,
Machines to help them stay alive,
Watch raging winds from out the window
And wonder if they will survive.

Of all the people that I think of
As rambling thoughts run through my mind,
The ones that really strike me deeply
Are the poor souls that are blind.

No way can I ever imagine
What those poor folks are going through.
The terror they must overcome is
Something I could never do.

So now the storm is fast approaching
As our sweet Mother pays a call.
If there were one thing I could wish for,
I'd wish that I could help them all.



[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 08-23-2000).]
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ladysixstring
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1 posted 2000-08-24 12:01 PM


Brings back memories... I was living in Broward County when Andrew hit.  I truly enjoyed these.  Hope you have an inspirational week.  Enjoy!!

-jaimie

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Balladeer
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2 posted 2000-08-24 12:04 PM


I LIVE in Broward county! You were here....and you didn't call me?!?!?! NUTS!

Thanks for enjoying  

Nan
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3 posted 2000-08-24 12:09 PM


A good time to blow that popsicle stand, and partake of that #1 Ball, Deer....
AVANTI
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4 posted 2000-08-24 01:21 AM


it one remined me of a classical piece...with it's various movements as in slow then fast you know what i mean?
like Allegro,andante?
very well written , well captured...

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 2000-08-24 03:46 AM


Lost in a spinning tornado of poetic thoughts.... The twister has swept me right off the ground...

regards and thanks for reposting,
sudhir

ethome
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6 posted 2000-08-24 03:59 AM


I missed these poems but I certainly am glad that I was finally able to read them...they are excellent......never been in a hurricane and have no desire to, but I can really appreciate the things you are writing about here.

Have a few good rounds and relax...that means, stay out of the woods, out of the bunkers, out of the deep rough and lastly, the greatest horror of them all, stay out of the water. Hope I have encouraged you....you know.

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2000-08-24 07:26 AM


Very nicely penned Balladeer! From the calm before the storm, to the fear of not knowing. I like to think things like this are Mother Nature's way of saying ... "wake up" and don't take each day for granted! Life as we know it can change in the blink of an eye! Stay safe, and have a great golf game!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2000-08-24 07:43 AM


Balladeer! ! !

Couldn't ya' stop in Clermont and pick me up ?
I don't eat much ...
I don't golf, but I love the outdoors
and North Carolina and white water rafting
and the mountains and trout fishing and ....
everything else !

Just run off and leave me here !  

Be safe and have a wonderful time !
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ladysixstring
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9 posted 2000-08-24 08:10 AM


Lived in Plantation (10 years) at Gatehouse on the Green apartments for a while, then a house on 13th street.... not far from the Broward Blvd. bridge... the one basically between Ft. Lauderdale and Plantation.   I used to work in the photo lab at the Publix in Coral Springs.  We left FL about 5 years ago.  

-jaimie

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Sunshine
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10 posted 2000-08-24 09:12 AM


Stay safe...my thoughts are with you...and others...
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