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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2000-08-23 11:40 PM


To make her laugh
would be a little piece of joy
in this world darkened but beautiful.

To listen to good radio
would heal my battered pieces
sinking in oil rainbows.

To breathe without sighing
would be a sign of love
without regret or relapse.

to save this tired boy from becoming a tired man.


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-08-23 11:49 PM


Ya think so, huh?  ROFL...could not, absolutely could not resist...hugs and love, me'friend...equally irrestistable...smile, for me, Mike...
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2000-08-23 11:56 PM


S'en,
How about a smile for both of us? For the whole effing world?  

Mike

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-08-23 11:59 PM


serenity exits...doing the softshoe...wink!
Janet Marie
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4 posted 2000-08-24 12:11 PM


To breathe without sighing
would be a sign of love
without regret or relapse.

to save this tired boy from becoming a tired man.

==========================
not a boy...
no boy could write with so
much soul...
this is so perfect Mike..
so sincere and so ...you
bs/jm

AVANTI
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5 posted 2000-08-24 01:32 AM


well written...


If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



bsquirrel
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6 posted 2000-08-25 01:20 AM


JM,
Thanks. Come back soon!

Av,
Merci.

Mike

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