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Sunshine
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Patterns Patterns fall so softly, slowly Over life and all its forms Shadows of the nether world Are by no means in their norm Life can switch so easily With one breathless sigh Eyes can lock and moments lapse In a calm, sweet by and by Like a leaf which soon will skip In fall’s great shifting gales It once clung to the tree of life Before it loosed and fell Like a love that needs forgot And put behind forever Patterns sometime need be broke But not when one says “never” 23 August 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sunshine a stunning poem, beautiful. Life can switch so easily With one breathless sigh Eyes can lock and moments lapse In a calm, sweet by and by Like a love that needs forgot And put behind forever Patterns sometime need be broke But not when one says “never” "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, my friend, so good to see you here! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
I like, Sunshine, this one has me examine self, look for those "patterns" that need breaking. Very good writing. Love, marcy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Alle', exactly. Thanks for peeking in... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nothing's worse than inertia a stagnation of thoughts in life All things need to change and one has to forever adapt life ... Wonderful and wise... regards to you Karilea, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh I enjoyed this Karilea! Patterns are but blueprints ... we can follow them, or choose to change the plans a bit.  I loved the way you've expressed your thoughts here in this lovely poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, wise? Maybe...Old, yes! Kit, looks like you're following me around...thank you ever so much for coming in... |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sunshine, This has such a peaceful quality to it and so pretty Michael |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Michael... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Patterns...which ones do we keep and which ones do we shatter...ohhhhh the choices and "the water"....yes **CHEERS**.....have a double  |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was very well written, makes one stop and think. You have made me stop, that is forsure. So much depth to this, wonderful read. Jenn E |
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Sunshine
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Butterflies, Jenn...thank you! I am simply amazed anymore at the responses I get...but I won't paraphrase "you like me, you really like me!" oops! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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