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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-08-23 11:22 AM


Unrivaled Bonds

I can only converse with you
in lexis only you may hear
unspoken words that flow like wine
through cyberspace and cross of line

a passion shared, a love well met
a chanced meeting to not forget
floating soft in cyberspace
captured in memory, then erased.

Conscience speaks of write so wronged
only in folio does this love belong
only in a soul’s heart will this reside
only in a moment in time to hide.

Spent night well in loved one’s arms
only in dreams do I share your charms.


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-08-23 11:29 AM


O my god... a winner all the way...

WOW Karilea, WOW,
regards,
sudhir

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2 posted 2000-08-23 12:04 PM


{~,^} thank you Sudhir...
Sven
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3 posted 2000-08-23 12:47 PM


Just beautiful Sunshine. . . absolutely beautiful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-08-23 01:21 PM


Thank you Sven...
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5 posted 2000-08-23 01:39 PM


Sunshine, you are never going to be able to keep what we have a secret if you keep writing like this!  

I love it, btw  

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6 posted 2000-08-23 01:46 PM


'Deer, haven't I told you to shhhhhhh?  
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7 posted 2000-08-23 01:51 PM


You somehow even make this sound romantic... "floating soft in cyberspace captured in memory, then erased."

-jaimie

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Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-08-23 01:53 PM


Ah Lady, love should know no bounds...thank you...
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9 posted 2000-08-23 02:00 PM


Now I know you gotta know how much I loved this little piece.  It is not so tiny in message and yes it is very romantic....the ones I like the best.  
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10 posted 2000-08-23 02:03 PM


small packages, Mark, small packages...
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11 posted 2000-08-23 07:37 PM


wow what a lovley poem....i like to think of how i met my love.."floating soft in cyberspace"
wow how beautiful that is  


"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me



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12 posted 2000-08-23 07:40 PM


Beautiful, Karilea, just beautiful. What a wonderful piece, so accurately portrays the situation.
catalinamoon

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13 posted 2000-08-24 09:19 AM


JnR4eva, cantalinamoon...may you find peace and more in cyberspace...
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