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Feed your Fantasy!
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Feed your Fantasy! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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I am who I am... And I will always be... You must understand that I... Don't want to feed your fantasy! Take me as I am... Or turn and set me free... I can't be your perfect dream... Don't want to feed your fantasy! I won't play a game... Just give me honesty.... I prefer the cold, hard facts... Don't want to feed your fantasy! I could give you more... Than you could ever need... But I want love on BOTH our terms... Don't want to feed your fantasy! So, take me as I am... And through eternity... I will give you what your heart desires... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And I will be your fantasy! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Sunny1, very brave of you to post at such a time when everybody has been taken up by the ANTE UP challenge.... but with such a tremendous piece of writing, why should you wait for the tides to subside... lovely... regards, sudhir |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Good strong message... I like..."But I want love on BOTH our terms..." -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sudhir... Good morning......and yes, there are a lot of 'ante' posts, but I never gamble before I have my morning coffee!! I'm glad you liked this.....it's just something I needed to say, and no time like the present!! Thank you, my friend..... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, good morning, and what a perfect little poem. Yes we have to be ourselves, but in doing so, maybe can be the fantasy also. Nice thought. Sandra Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi ladysixstring.... Yes....that, to me, was the most important message in the poem!! It has to be that way, or there's no balance in the relationship, at least that is what I've found!! Thank you for coming by !!!!!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Good Morning Sandra!! Yep, you nailed the whole thought perfectly!! That's just what I was trying to say, and I'm glad it came through. Good to see you here, my friend.... I'll take a coffee and amaretto, please!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AWW Sunny1 heres that old fantasy vs. reality thing again...the love has to be real for the fantasy to exist. SIGH... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Humm, the guys with the spoons seem to be lining up on the left side... good stuff! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nicely written!!!!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, A fantasy dreamt could be a fantasy lost, but a love that is real, will not fade away. Nicely done Sunny, as always. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Challenge or not I will seek them down....this is so beautiful in sentiment and in heart.....real truth behind this but so hard to find....wish you luck on it. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunny1-Superbly written, I enjoyed the read. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
but gee s1-- dreams and fantasy are oftentimes all that is left us ...lol---just kidding-- very nice poem Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Paula.... Well, I hate to disagree, but in this case, the fantasy came first....then the love for the fantasy developed, with no reality involved.......strange, but true!! Thank you, my friend.....I enjoy discussion! Sunshine....Spoons not allowed.....this is finger-food!!!!!!!!! Thank you!! vandana....Good to see you here! Thankyou for your kind words!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this little piece of your heart...I tend to believe that my hopes, dreams, and fantasies are all one and the same...perhaps...yes...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Bill... Wise words: a true love does not fade away....but if love is built on a fantasy in the first place, truth will see it fade in the end! Thank you, dear friend! Hi Mark... Thank you for coming by to say hi, and your kind words about my work! I agree with you, BTW. Hi Gemini... You are always so nice in your replies, and I hope I can write many more for you to enjoy, as you have done so for me! Hi Jamie... Yes, you are so very right in that one.....all kidding aside!! Sometimes a fantasy has to do, until the real thing comes along!! Thank you so much and good to see you today!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi jmlee 12345.... Yes, you are also right. Fantasies are such personal things, that each one of us looks at them in a different way, and they are part of us. It's like art, or music, or poetry.....we all hear and see as individuals. Think how boring it would be otherwise!! Glad to see you here!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hello Sunny, Very well said, my friend...very well put. I liked the line "And I will be your fantasy"... of course, I liked them all, but being yourself can often be more of a fantasy because of truth, than any dream could ever contain. Take care, Michael |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Michael... Ahhh...you always put things in just the right way......I learn so much from your replies, as well as your poetry!! I am happy that you liked this one, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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