Open Poetry #9 |
Don't Give Up on Me |
Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
Don't Give Up on Me I said I'd follow my heart I'd never go too far I'd never give up on love or ever forsake my heart But you smiled at me just right and said you'd always care I thought you were for me no other could compare So I gave into you need and let my innocense die And I told you how I felt as I gazed into your eye Then you held me for a time but began to pull away As you slowly walked away alittle more each day You took my love for granted and expected me to care While others came along with so much love to share My teardrops fall tonight as I lay alone in bed While mixed emotions and shattered dreams swirl in my head My arms just want to hold you and never let you go But you don't hold me anymore and let your feelings show Deep down I know you care and long to hold me near Yet your undying passions are overcome by fear Maybe that I'll hurt you and someday walk away Or maybe that you'll be tied down by a love that will never stray But love can't be forgotten it never leaves your heart Even if it hurt you and tore your dreams apart So please say you'll stay say you'll hold me near Take away this sadness and wipe away my tears So tell me we can work it out and we can set these feeling free Tell me that you'll hold me close each night and that you won't give up on me POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very heartfelt, PP, and I hope it works out for you. I know that feeling well. Take care. catalinamoon |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Very nice!!! Poetry Princess, I can feel your heart bleed from here. -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
Thank you for your replys. I wrote this poem a year ago and am no longer with this guy. He kinda decided he wanted to be single and that he wasn't ready for commitment which was fine with me I need to find a man who will understand me. And the main problem we had is he said I spent too much time writting and not enough time living so I am doing this by myself and moving on. Thank you all for your responses POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend? |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Words from heart and so heart felt by myself. Enjoyed it tremendously. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Poetry Princess-Very beautiful and heartfelt piece. |
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