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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-23 12:49 PM


In temperment made of joy
my heart soars this land
From surrounding hills of green
that permit my inner strength to sing
Of those small distant triumphs
to which I overcame
My bitter enemies of pleasure
and to those simple fools again
Say what you will
and leave me to my thoughts
Not of revenge
but for living my life
Look you quick
for the star I ride tonight
Is the one in my soul
that shall always burn bright

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Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
1 posted 2000-08-23 09:16 AM


Your soul shines like the brightest star and only second to the warmth of your heart.  

Thank you for writing this one for me Michael, I know it will appear in a book of your complete writings one day.......Of this I have no doubt.....    
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It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley




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ladysixstring
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

2 posted 2000-08-23 10:51 AM


This definately shines... especially... "for the star I ride tonight Is the one in my soul"

-jaimie

Website: www.ladysixstring.com

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-08-23 11:16 PM


Say what you will
and leave me to my thoughts
Not of revenge
but for living my life
Look you quick
for the star I ride tonight
Is the one in my soul
that shall always burn bright
===============
oyur poetry shines Michael...
as does your heart...in every line
love this one..
jm

Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
4 posted 2000-08-24 09:04 PM


This one is just to special to sit in the wings.  This one means a lot to me Michael and I know the title itself.......means the world to you.  so BTT!!!

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
5 posted 2000-09-06 02:16 AM


Today we are only having "happy thoughts"!!!  so this just seemed perfect!!!!
Hugs to you......thinking about you.....

Marina


PS. No! You didn't get away with NOT writing another happy one.  LOL  


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



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