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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2000-08-22 07:59 PM

“I MET YOU IN THE MEADOW”

I came there just at dawn,
down to your lovely meadow.
When the morning mist was lifting,
and the deep blue sky, was all aglow.

I could see you waiting there,
sitting you were, just like a pose.
But all I could see was ruby red lips,
that reminded me, of one sweet rose.

I called and you turned,
your smile was as big as the sea.
And we lie together on that blanket,
embracing, just you and me.

I felt that gentle breeze blowing,
watching it flow, through your pretty hair.
It touched me, and I felt it,
and our bodies became aware.

Ah yes, I could love you forever,
for you are, a lovely little gypsy.
However, not in rhyme it would be,
but would rather always, be passionately.

So, I did meet you in your meadow,
and it didn’t matter, if it was day or night.
Because I tasted your gypsy magic,
having your softness, and your delight.

Bill Charles

ddgoose
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1 posted 2000-08-22 08:26 PM

Bill

"I felt that gentle breeze blowing,
watching it flow, through your pretty hair.
It touched me, and I felt it,
and our bodies became aware."

WOW  WOW  WOW  WOW  WOW
Where is this meadow?  Can you send me a map?
Words are very descriptive - you feel like you are there.  Nice poem!

didi

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2000-08-23 07:40 AM

Good morning 'didi',
Thank you so much for coming by, and for your kind and expressionative comments. The meadow is where ever you may find it, here, there, or everywhere. I am making a map, and will post it. Thanks again, 'didi'.

Meadowmuse
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3 posted 2000-08-23 08:18 AM

Very sweet, Bill...how could she possibly resist?

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Sunshine

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4 posted 2000-08-23 09:34 AM

gypsy magic, for sure!

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2000-08-23 09:44 AM

Good morning Bill!

What an absolutely beautiful answer to my poem!!!! I thank you sincerely, and am honored to have you complete my verses with yours! Now the two together are as a tender love song....complete from beginning to end.
Thank you so much, my dear friend!

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2000-08-23 12:20 PM

Hi Meadowmuse,
Thank you for coming by, and that is a very good question Claire.

Hi Sunshine,
Ahh yes, nothing like that gypsy magic! Thanks for taking the time to stop by.

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2000-08-23 12:23 PM

Hello Sunny,
Thank you so much for coming by this morning, and for your considerate comments to this reply to that beautiful poem that you have written.

I'm very glad that you liked it, and as you have mentioned, it is now complete. Thanks Sunny.

Sunnyone
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8 posted 2000-08-23 02:51 PM

Bill.....Usually I don't post twice, but I just had to tell you that your poem becomes more beautiful, the more it is read! I think they should be posted together at some point.
Let me know.......
Sunny

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-08-23 05:05 PM

very Beautiful, Bill

~~softly
Maureen

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10 posted 2000-08-23 05:11 PM

Beautifully written. So soft and passionate.

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2000-08-23 07:33 PM

Hi Sunny,
I believe that you have a terrific idea. Let's do it.... Need to know how to do it. Thanks Sunny, your super, and I'm very pleased that you liked it.

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2000-08-23 07:37 PM

Hi Maureen,
Thank you so much for coming by, and for the pleasant comment.

Hi susanbartee,
Thank you for stopping by to read my poem that I have written. And for the kind comments.

Martie

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13 posted 2000-08-23 07:45 PM

Bill--The meadow in your sweet poetic vision is certainly lovely...

Bill Charles
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14 posted 2000-08-23 08:13 PM

Hello Martie,
Oh yes, what a beautiful meadow it is, and it was a pleasure to write this reply. Thank you for coming by, and for your kind reply.

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