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under my skin
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under my skin |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
I want to breath you in for just moment taste you every inch... get to know you getting under my skin get to know me look into my eyes take off my skin see under my disguise do you know my name? do we feel the same? I've got my eyes wide open like a kaliedoscope spinning out of control your following me around in my mind I look in the mirror I see where you've been always there to keep my eyes wide open I don't want to let go I'm out of control following me around day after day I just can't escape And if asked you, would you meet me in my mind? I want to take you with me when I dream and it won't take long promise I will be strong let you go in the morning light just want to feel alive take you places you've never been I haven't wanted this since I don't when invading my dreams you move through my thoughts in mysterious ways day light comes washes you away I scream a million things I want to say pulling my hair out with thoughts of you and don't make promises that you can't keep I will be happy keeping you with me as I sleep and I won't say a single thing you can't believe just want to feel you insde of me feel you breath give you everything you need so now I'm waiting going crazy And I've got all you've been craving all of my passion I've been saving and now I'm praying can you hear me saying I will wait till the end of time just to taste your kiss it is my only wish the genie said I had three will he grant this one to me? And if asked you, would you meet me in my mind? I want to take you with me when I dream and it won't take long promise I will be strong let you go in the morning light just want to feel alive take you places you've never been I haven't wanted this since I don't when Just me |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
saraC... I love this line.... "I want to take you with me when I dream" Ahhhh...that is so nice and tender, and shows a loving need..... This poem is beautiful! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
SarahC, I really enjoyed this, read it several times. Romance lives. Dee |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
This is really very nice, I enjoyed it very much!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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