navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #9 » Seasoned With Love
Open Poetry #9
Post A Reply Post New Topic Seasoned With Love Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
English Rose
Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211
Berkshire, England

0 posted 2000-08-22 11:37 AM



Winter is when you are gone.
The absence of your touch hurts
And the sun hides behind the veil that you throw
                              across your smile.

Then I see you again
And Spring bursts in the door beside you;
Your very presence banishes all dark from inside me.

As we go further on
Our life becomes a Summer of love.
Birds fly in a blue sky and the world begins to
                                    turn faster.

Our Autumn will be together.
Life takes on a steady pace
And the things that left me cold in Winter, perish
                                 in my heartflame.

                              








© Copyright 2000 Debbie Sanderson - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2000-08-22 11:48 AM


Well written, my friend, something I'd been proud to call my own...

jwesley

English Rose
Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211
Berkshire, England
2 posted 2000-08-22 12:03 PM


Gosh thanks Jwesly...I have read your poetry and I take that as an enormous compliment!!!!
BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
3 posted 2000-08-22 12:09 PM


English Rose, What a wonderful job you have done with this.  I love the way you use the seasons and the imagery it brought to my mind.  Beautiful piece.  Bonnie
LngJhnAg
Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 2000-08-22 12:11 PM


very sweet, and filled with promises that, hopefully, are as sure as the seasons.
English Rose
Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211
Berkshire, England
5 posted 2000-08-22 03:49 PM


I am glad you liked the imigery Bonnie...I worked hard on this one
English Rose
Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211
Berkshire, England
6 posted 2000-08-22 04:27 PM


Thank you LngJhn...appreciate your words
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #9 » Seasoned With Love

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary