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I Coo -- (Repost for Mark Bohannan)
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I Coo -- (Repost for Mark Bohannan) |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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How can I be unfaithful? You inspired all my best What remains for another? [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
My one and only Haiku Mark... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
local rebel-I am not sure you can really call this a Haiku and it does not fit the 5-7-5 format...and if it did I believe it would be senyru. I am new at these so you may want to ask someone like Marge or Liz. The words are beautiful and I am sure they can go into a senyru easily. Thanks for bringing this one out for me. I smile this morning.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark's correct, Rebel, but wonderful sentiments nonetheless... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Well... that's why I don't ku... thanks ya'll |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Rebel, I don't ku either, but I would if I could ku as closely as you. This is sweet. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
I don't do the ku either but this was pretty neat what ever it's official catagory. -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Incredible writing! Corinne |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Well I was trying to let this one die a peaceful and merciful death but I had to respond to everyone with a resounding 'thanks' |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Rebel...who cares WHAT it is...this is lovely and stands on its own |
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