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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-22 08:51 AM


thought kisses

just the thought of your kisses touching my skin
or even if blown through the air
brings fluttering, tingling, desires on rise
and the most powerful feelings to share.

a butterfly kiss, one so soft on my lids
or a kiss full on mouth, deep and strong
makes beating erratic, this heart, mine of love
and the ~~sighing  released, just goes on.  

a kiss has such power, when skin touches skin
no matter the parts that lips reach
but the kisses of thought, they possess more effect
when the feelings of mind touches each.


Once in a ...Blue Moon




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ladysixstring
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1 posted 2000-08-22 11:06 PM


So pretty... "or even if blown through the air brings fluttering, tingling, desires on rise" are so visual!! Nice!!

-jaimie

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poutprincess
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2 posted 2000-08-23 01:46 AM


ah Maureen...this is beautiful...loved this!!
"but the kisses of thought,they posses more effect when the feelings of mind touches each"
i agree!!
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

CocoBaci
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3 posted 2000-08-23 01:48 AM


Very sweeeet this one Maureen!

Coco

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-08-24 05:08 PM


-jaimie..just love those thought kisses....
thank you,
~~smiles
Maureen

susanbartee
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5 posted 2000-08-24 05:28 PM


Poutprincess' comments say exactly how I feel about this fine piece of work.
MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-08-24 07:05 PM


Dawn, how are you doing... thanks for reading...
~~soft hugs
Maureen

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-08-25 10:38 AM


Coco ..that's me..either sweetness or tears..someday I will write "deep"
~~soft thanks
Maureen

Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2000-08-25 10:41 AM


mmmmmm....yes a kiss can be one of the sweeter things in life.....as can a loving hug from the heart(why not a follow up on that from you.  would like to see it.)....Well written and so nice of a feeling it leaves me with.
MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-08-28 10:18 AM


susan
thank you...yes that Princess of the Dawn  has just the right words to  say all the time
~~soft hugs
Maureen


poutprincess
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10 posted 2000-08-28 11:53 AM


oh i had to come back and give you a huge hug for that!
******H U G******
do all moon children give fairy wishes in guise of angel kisses....or is it just you lovely maureen?
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



Marsha
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11 posted 2000-08-28 11:57 AM


Maureen, this is so good, the imagery is perfect. I love the thought of thought kisses, loved this poem. Take care, and feel the thought kisses flying to you.  
MMoonchild
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12 posted 2000-08-29 07:57 PM


~Dawn...I appreciate kindness and sincerety and gentle natured persons such as yourself
~~soft hugs back, my friend
Maureen

MMoonchild
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13 posted 2000-08-29 08:00 PM


Marsha

aren't kisses just wonderful...and there are so many kinds...we had a challenge once on writing about kisses..the first kiss ever..the worst kiss..the next kiss to come..and hersheys  chocolate kisses...it was really enjoyable to hear all the  kiss stories
thank you Marsha for your thoughts {{hugs}}
Maureen

Bill Charles
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14 posted 2000-08-29 08:24 PM


Ahh Maureen,
Such a talent you are. Very delightful, as I read this poem into a dreamland.
Kisses, ahhh.

MMoonchild
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15 posted 2000-08-30 06:16 AM


Mark ...don't know how I missed you, as I always look forward to your responses

Heart Hugs..hmm a nice  idea..will try that today..will give me something nice to think about
{{heart hugs}}to you  
Maureen

MMoonchild
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16 posted 2000-08-30 06:19 AM


Bill ...thank you...another  nice idea..dream kissed....
~~soft hugs
Maureen

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