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Irisheyes New Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 4 |
Why did you leave me here? Without you,alone. What did you do to my heart? Broken and torn. Why did you promise me the world? Impossible promises. Did you think after harsh words I would just stop loving you? Dark and cold,they pierced my heart. Why did you just walk away? I was always beside you. You say "Can we just be friends?" As if thats any better in the end. Am I doing alright? Yes,if you consider the struggle and the fight. Can we try again? I don't think I could ever let you back in. So where does this leave us? If you think about it,was there ever an "us" to be known? |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Have you been secretly living my life there Irisheyes? A very moving openning piece...I look forward to reading more from you |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Love certainly isn't easy, is it? You've expressed those parting feelings nicely, Irisheyes... Welcome to Passions - You're going to love it here... Check your mailbox for a special greeting..  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed your poetry. Nicely written. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Welcome to Passion's. Why didn't you post this in Dark Passions where pain is not an optional extra. Good poem Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great entry... IrishEyes... WELCOME TO PASSIONS regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Irisheyes... I would like to add my welcome to the others, and also say that this is wonderful writing here!! We're glad to have you join us, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Impossible promises...would be a perfect title for this...  ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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