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Dreams Of A Lover |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Dreams Of A Lover ~*Marge Tindal*~ I have dreamed the dreams of a lover, knowing the satisfaction of your smile. Holding and caressing you, watching you all the while. I have dreamed with the comfort of my head upon your chest. Taken the liberty of being, softly impressed. I've gazed into your eyes and seen your pleasure spent. Giving back one on one, the feeling Heaven sent. I have known the joy of serenity, wrapped in your arms while sleeping. Dreaming gentle dreams, mine for the keeping. You are the lover in my dreams, the reward of chances taken. All I want this night to be, still here when I awaken. I have loved you dearly and most sincerely in the hours of slumbered measure. Keeping the dream while awake, my greatest pleasure. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh, Marge- This is beautiful. I love it.  'keeping the dream while awake, my greatest pleasure' You write so beautifully. Thank you for sharing this. love you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
O Marge, dreams like these are why I even try to sleep...perfect...another mmmmmmmm from mom! |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
Marge this is beautiful.....hold your love close to you,as always..great post Just me |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Marge ... a tender and romantic rendering straight from your tender and romantic heart ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
T R E M E N D O U S E R R O M A N T I C I A F R O C K S I G L C E X C E P T I O N A L V E L E G A N T L L Y R I C A L  Many regards, Sudhir. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ My romantic muse is flitting around my nights. Thank you for the comments. Serenity~ Dream on, little friend. SarahC~ Thank you for the thoughts. Kit~ Thanks, my friend. I think I'm incurably romantic ! Sudhir~ You do - what you do - BRILLIANTLY ! I'm awed at the versatility of your talent. Thank you for sharing and for enjoying what I do. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderful poem Marge... kind of makes you want to go take a nap... beautifully written. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As always, the pleasure is ours... |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ohhhh what a dream Marge. And how beautifully you have told us of it... certainly our pleasure to read. Bonnie |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yes, dreams. And where would we be without them? Television just isn't the same, is it. And to have wonderful dreams, such as you...ah dreams, and now I lay me down to sleep... jwesley |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge...you never told me.....  .....This is so sweet....just want to reach out and give you such a big hug....Very beautiful my friend.  still you should have told me. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, Your poetry is always such a pleasure to read. How wonderful and lovely I find this one. Michael |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, This was lovely, definitely something looked forward to loved muches. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...live your dreams while they are fresh in your heart...James |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Wonderful!! I enjoyed this one!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Another beauty my friend. You never cease to amaze me. Love ya, Juls |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Loved this, Marge! Very soft and sensual, my kind of poem!!! Yeaaahhhhhhh! Great shade of "dreamy" blue, too! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Naps are a GOOD thing ! Karilea~ You're a sweetie ! Bonnie~ I love your replies ! You are also a delight to read. JWesley~ They are just the greatest ! Thank you. MarkB~ Love - I did tell you ! Just like a man ! !  I'll take that *hug* ... Make it two ! ! Michael~ Thank you, that's a lovely comment. Cerenity~ And I send you dreams to pillow your heart. James~ You've sure got that right ! I just knew you'd like this ! Lady6Strings~ Thank you so much. Juliet~ You know I appreciate your comments ! ! Corinne~ Yeah ... mine too ! It IS a dreamy color ... thanks for noticing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! So soft and lovely! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I would know you'd enjoy this one ! Thank you soooooo much ! Balladeer~ Been there ....... Mmmmmmmmmm! Done that ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
nice poem... don't quite understand the wet part but i guess i'll have to read it again. *grin* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sweet dream it is Marge you've penned here! I like this one soooooo much Hugz2U Coco |
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