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ladysixstring
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since 2000-07-27
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0 posted 2000-08-22 12:48 PM


Note:  I have several light-hearted pieces written from a man's perspective... this is one.  Also, from my PukeOutLoud collection.  *S*


We swung by my place
because she had to use the toilet
It was starting to rain
I grabbed an umbrella from the closet

That's when I heard a scream
Oh what could it mean
Should I check, should I stay
Would she be okay

I took my chances
I decided to wait
It was an hour before the movie
we wouldn't be late

When she opened the door
the look in her eyes
Made it clear as day
and I realized

She was in a hurry
and the lights were down low
It never even occurred to her
she just had to go

See... she has no brothers
always lived with her mother
She doesn't understand
that in the home of a man...

Well... it might be poor etiquette
might just be tacky
But in the home of a man
Ladies... PUT DOWN THE SEAT!!!< !signature-->

-jaimie

Website: www.ladysixstring.com


[This message has been edited by ladysixstring (edited 08-22-2000).]

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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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1 posted 2000-08-22 12:58 PM


Cute I really like this.....form a mans perspective it is funny I am sure.....I too was raised with all girls....so I know what this is like...not used to having to look.... Greta work here...

Julie :)



T McCoy
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since 2000-07-24
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2 posted 2000-08-22 03:07 AM


hey very cool...
and your "PukeOutLoud" collection?  
i like that...

Tony

Mike
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3 posted 2000-08-22 06:11 PM


*cute*  nicely written.
Sven
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4 posted 2000-08-22 07:01 PM


LOL  

Just too cool. . . think I'll start my own "Puke Out Loud" collection!!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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