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I've turned few keys
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I've turned few keys |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I've turned a few keys Calligraphy plays goldilocks Before the door of paradox. Musing through an inward trail Tasting porridge touching braille. Planting in a bed of bare. Reticent of who will care. Picking through pandoras box Each of vernals equinox. Turning keys to senses flare Bringing phantoms to declare. Fantasy's in candle light. Shinning through forevers night. Holding up a new found plot Beaming hot the why of not. Giving, taking, preaching goal. Are we not of just one soul? Since life is but a one act play. Turn a key and make your day. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Yep, this one I like. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*speechless for a moment* As a key-turner myself, this is utterly fascinating |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Calligraphy plays goldilocks Before the door of paradox. Musing through an inward trail Tasting porridge touching braille.' Wonderful ! Wonderful ! You are quite remarkable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Seymour, Beautifully written; I love the meter and rhyme of this. And you present a very thoughtful suggestion, especially with the last couplet. We should all "turn keys" in our lives. Well Done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Thank you for the read and comment. Passing shadows, Thank you key turner. Marge, And you are wonderful too. Rascalx, Thank you for the well done. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This is so beautifully written, your message floats just below those words that softly hover above the page. The rhyme and meter are perfect.Love it From an old key turner Liz |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is FABULOUS regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I've seen you and your no old key turner. I would say a young and beautiful key turner. Love Sy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All of the responses...could've been mine, had I been here a wee bit earlier... well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Your well done stands as tall as any of the above with me. *L* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seymour.... Great writing, great message!! Need I say more?? Thank you for the enjoyable read!< !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, That was sunny of you, thank you so much. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great work Seymour! I've turned a few myself and there's always a new adventure to embark upon. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, Thank you glad you enjoyed this. |
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