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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-08-21 06:06 PM



The Dance

The dance begins
A shy glance
A hesitant smile
A simple tilt of the head
An up word look
Fingers trace coyly
Down the length of her neck
Her eyes calling him near
They move together
Their bodies drawn closer
Meeting with a need
In an ancient dance
Like so many lovers before
Moving in time
Lip to lips
Chest to chest
Hip to hip
Bodies moving in rhythm
With their pounding hearts

I have been gone, my keyboard died on me....lol.  I just wanted to say that I am glad to be back and I missed reading everyone wonderful poems  


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JnR4eva
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1 posted 2000-08-21 06:08 PM


Hi it's good to have you back with us .  I enjoyed the imagery that you have here...very nice, sensual, and romantic  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me



JnR4eva
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2 posted 2000-08-21 06:09 PM


Hi it's good to have you back with us .  I enjoyed the imagery that you have here...very nice, sensual, and romantic  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me



rosepetals25
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3 posted 2000-08-21 06:28 PM


JnR4eva -  Thank you It is great to be back.  I'm glad you liked my poem  
ladysixstring
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4 posted 2000-08-21 06:36 PM


Such a sensual description here!! Very nice!!

-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com



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