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Pandemonium |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Pandemonium The rapid colliding of brain cells and emotions at such a high rate of speed that confusion is created. Confusion about life Confusion about self Confusion about needs. What is left is a calamity of a persons thoughts That lead us back to where we started. Pandemonium |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
yep - that's me at times - and the circle is a TIGHT one, too! lol |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an interesting cycle you've portayed here...I've often thought about it that way but never really knew how to explain it. thank you |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
a vicious cycle..yes indeed, nicely put spiked  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You've described this so well without ever having come to one of our barbecues---perhaps it's just J.J.'s? Smile now, don't make me come over there and kick your butt!!! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
You have all caught onto my circle of psycosis and I thank you for your response. Rich |
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