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Martini
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since 2000-07-11
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-08-21 01:57 PM



Palms of sweat
Eyes of tears
Anxieties were met
Easing our fears

Hearts of sorrow
Bodies so weak
Fears of tomorrow
As we speak

The past fogotten
The future remains
Our lives like cotton
With unending stains

Wisdom is few
Adulthood is here
We once were two
Now a third is near

Hand in hand
Heart with heart
We take a stand
Begin a new start

Palms of sweat
Eyes of tears
Anxieties were met
Easing our fears


"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-08-21 02:07 PM


I like this very much..accepting the responsibilities and moving on in the comfort of that...very well done and you met the challenge very well.
Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-08-21 02:13 PM


ethome
thanks
I haven't been around in a while and I had fun doing this as my first one back

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Martie
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3 posted 2000-08-21 02:14 PM


Corazon--I like the message here...nice form, beautifully done!
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-08-21 02:17 PM


AAAAHHHh.....Martini...welcome back and I as so happy to have been a part of your return.......beautiful verse and the message even better.  A gold for sure for you my dear....now up on the podium as your ceremony is about to begin.
Martini
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since 2000-07-11
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-08-21 02:25 PM


Thanks so much

Mark, I was honored to even attempt at your challenge...  thank you so much

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
6 posted 2000-08-22 05:03 AM


WONDERFUL WONDERFUL...

an excellent offering to the challenge from you, Martini

regards,
sudhir

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2000-08-22 04:04 PM


bump---
Martini
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8 posted 2000-08-23 08:36 AM


Sudhir
thanks so much!!     You kind words are greatly appreciated

Mark
thank you

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

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