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Local Rebel
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0 posted 2000-08-21 11:28 AM


Thoughts swimming in schools
Devoured
the Sharks of reality
Prey daily

like Muslims



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Corazon
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1 posted 2000-08-21 12:45 PM


yep no kidding, it is a marvel in the demands of this world that we here hang onto our creativity......love this ....but....and probably its just me.....but the muslims???
don't get that part....

Corazon
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2 posted 2000-08-21 12:46 PM


ok......*hits her forehead* absolutely rofg...I get it........lolol.....makes the poem even better  
ethome
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3 posted 2000-08-21 01:20 PM


Prey daily...pray daily...hope for the faith to continue on in this craft and be able to recieve small reminders that trip the thinking...very well done!!
doreen peri
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4 posted 2000-08-21 04:01 PM


ROFL... thoughts thwim in thchools? thankth! learned thomething new today!  

hehe...this is really great! i once wrote something about pirahnas and their prey which reminds me of this... but yours is so much better!!! the shark imagery makes a much bigger impact than a pirhana... Prey daily, like muslims... ARGHHHH... too funny!!... how do you DO this, btw... you say so much in so few words! i'm a rambler.. wish i had your skills... i envy that ability in a writer... nicely done, rebellious one

LngJhnAg
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5 posted 2000-08-21 04:10 PM


Rebel - you are really, really deep
Local Rebel
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6 posted 2000-08-21 05:35 PM


well this bit of honey caught more flies than I expected....

thanxth for the read everyone!! ;-)

JulieAnn
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7 posted 2000-08-21 05:46 PM


Wow...very deep and with so few words
I liked this a lot....

Julie :)



passing shadows
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8 posted 2000-08-21 05:52 PM


duh...it's the blonde in me, I sware...took me awhile to get it...very clever Mr. Rebel
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