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A Moment Of Peace (A Touch Of Serenity)
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A Moment Of Peace (A Touch Of Serenity) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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A Moment Of Peace (A Touch Of Serenity) My town, a place of lasting peace Where my troubles begin to ease, My home, next to a serene tree Where I feel so unbound and free. Behind my home, a silken river flows Amid lush greens, she dances free, Full moon shines in a celestial glow Reflecting smiles through the tree. Yesterdays take me to summer days When in the river, I used to swim, Childhood visions lend their gaze Of happiness, filled up to the brim. Fruit of a waterfall, down she came Her beauty remains, as ever famed; Her thoughts, even today, bring glee Enticing me, towards her, to flee. Butterflies, doves, honey-suckled bees Invite me to join a dance and to sing, To rejoice free, in a moment of peace, An instant of an ecliptic diamond ring. ~seeking harmony and tranquillity, who isn't?~ [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have got to see this waterfall!!! Until I can dip my serene toes in it personally sudhir, anyway we could get a pic? I'm obsessing about it now...hugs to you me friend...your beautiful spirit shines through in every thing you do. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Sudhir, what a joy this is to read. I could see this place and all the visions so clearly. Adding it to my library. Thanks my friend. Juls |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir--everyone needs a place such as this, even if it is only in their heart...beautifully written! |
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meimi New Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 4Las Piñas City, Philippines |
that is a very nice poem. reading it gives me a moment of peace... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Sudhir this is a beauty...what a beautiful place you have described, I can see how you miss it so. Love the ramble through the lines and the serenity is well captured in the mood.....ecliptic diamond ring... there are several million people that could use one of those...have a nice day.. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh what lovely images this creates Sudhir. There are 3 waterfalls within 2 miles of my home, and niagara falls is only 50 miles away, the rivers and the falls certainly give much inspiration. This is beautiful. Bonnie |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Well thank you Sudhir allowing my imagination to take a vacation. Wow what a poem... and to think if I heard this poem with some soft music and a nice back rub....ohh man I would be in heaven  great writing once again "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sudhir, you have really captured the essence of a beautiful scene here....and there's something about the phrase "a touch of Serenity" that sends chills all over me  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sudhir sounds like heaven, beautiful serene calming magical dazzling "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sorry to interrupt your thread here, sudhir, but Balladeer, I am sure you meant that in the nicest possible way...please reassure the forum that you are not in need of anitbiotics....Laughter and much hugs to both of you!!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Sudhir~ What a wonderful place you describe. I'm taken there in an instant ! Marvelous imagery, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Save me and mine a spot next to the silken river, in the full moon; beautifully done. jwesley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a lovely walk you have taken me on Sudhir...thank you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do put forth beautiful thoughts... |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sudhir, Wonderful writing. Wow! If this is really home for you then it is a reflection of the precious you. So enjoyed. Love, Marcy |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
You have shared a peaceful part of yourself through this poem, my friend. Lovely. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed much. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My friends... I can't express very clearly how much you have all moved me with your beautiful words... Thanks a lot... O Serene One... of course you can have the pic... I have asked my younger bro to send me the pic... as soon as I have it, it will be scanned and send to you... that's a deal... Thanks for your lovely kind words... Juliet, I am honoured to be bookmarked into your library... thanks Martie, your words mean a lot... thanks Meimi, firstly  Welcome to passions and thanks for reading...ethome, thanks a million... I did have a nice day yesterday, keep wishing, it helps... bonnie, thanks a lot... aren't waterfalls beauties... JnR4Eva, Thanks for the huge compliment... Balladeer, your coming in to read my work is making me proud ... Thanks... what chills  My regards, sudhir |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
... brian, wow that's where all the imagery went... your response is so profound.. thank you... serenity... any time feel free... smiling at that one Marge, I am so glad I could take you there in flights of thoughts... Thanks jwesley, order noted and placed  ... thanksPaula, I am glad you enjoyed... thanks Karilea, I do?  Thanks a lot as always...Marcy, you have expressed some lovely sentiments... thank you Claire, thank you very much, my friend... Mike, I am glad that you enjoed this one... My sincerest thanks to all... regards, sudhir |
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