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Prhyme Time |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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I haven't any rhyme for you I don't know what I'm going to do My words took wing and off they flew I haven't any rhyme! My muse is not amused today She packed her words and went away Left me without a thing to say I haven't any rhyme! It seems like only yesterday My words ever with me would stay But now those words in silence lay I haven't any rhyme! So, tell me please, is there a cure? Can it restore my words for sure? Will they return in haste and pure? I haven't any rhyme! But wait.....I feel some poetry Is stirring in the depths of me I hear it screaming, "Set me free" I think my rhyme found me!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
What an enjoyable piece this is  I have read one other poem which contradicts itself and let me tell you I had blast reading it as I have with this one( i think this is better though)...this is so fun and cleverly done..good writting, sunny1 "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Sunny, I've had days just like that, then out of the blue, there it was...thought my poetic days were done...Sunny, you're a very good poet, and I really do mean that. I enjoy your work so much. Keep writing! your friend, Michael |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
excellent sunny.....very funny and I would say you never lost your muse at all maybe just misplaced it!! I liked it.....you definitely found your muse in any sense anyway......[This message has been edited by sarahC (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is so cute! you have left me grinning! ~Dawn  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Precociously precious poem. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi JnR4eva..... I'm glad you enjoyed this! It was meant to be light and impart a giggle! Thank you!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Michael.... Thank you for such nice words in your reply. I am truly glad for friends like you, whom I also admire and enjoy!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi sarahC..... Yes, my muse takes an unsolicited vacation now and then, but she always seems to come back to me at the most inopportune moments......like now, at 3AM!!! Thank you for reading and enjoying!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Dawn.... Ahhhhh....your face looks perfect with a grin!!! Thank you, my friend, for stopping by to read this little piece that my muse and I cooked up for you!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marge..... Just a little bit of fluff to get a giggle from........thank you for coming by! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Amusing muse there. Giggled all the way through. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Kethry.... Sometimes I do believe my muse is a clown!! Or, maybe I am!!! Thank you and I'm glad I could make you smile!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Sunny, Another gem you have written. Especially the following verse. So, tell me please, is there a cure? Can it restore my words for sure? Will they return in haste and pure? I haven't any rhyme! Yes Sunny, there is a cure. You found it when the rhyme found you! Bill |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Good Morning Bill..... I thank you, and I think you might be right!! The cure is in the rhyme....at least it always makes me feel better!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
If you call this fluff, then Sunny1... it is a great fluff... nice work... regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Sudhir, you are always so good to me in your kind replies, and I thank you for that! (Glad you liked my little fluff!!) Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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